When I'm Gone - Comments, page 11

@cloudyskye

Ah! Hope you've liked it so far!! Thank you so much for the kind words, and welcome to the journey! :)

@ONE DIRECTION LOVE

Well of course i had to throw that bit in there, I mean, Kate is always acting mature I feel like every girl secretly freaks when she thinks things might finally fall into place. ::)

@not_any_maryjane

Aww thank you soo much! That's a HUGE compliment coming from you, your story is just fantastic. :)

@Kitten2014

Hahahah...Eleacow. Never cease to make me laugh. And I thought about that, but feel as though Louis already has enough conflict... :)

Started reading this last night and I am
absolutely in love!! So well written! Can't wait for more!

@KAOT
I did like this chapter. And Kate. Lol the way she reacted ant the end was funny. Can't wait till the next chapter. :)

Yeah, totally with @Kitten2014! Families don't like change very much, especially after so many years... This story just keeps getting better. You deserve all the LOVE!

He had better stick to how he's feeling, not go home and have everyone convince him that he should stay with Eleacow....

@Emmy2320

Ahh good! I picture him just being shocked..which I can picture quite easily enough because I swear in every picture I see of Louis his face isn't a normal smile. lol.

@breadboy101

It was a hard part to write about Olivia and Louis, but I always try to remember she's just four so she doesn't have that filter us adults have and she's not old enough to understand what happened to her dad and doesn't get why Louis just can't be her dad. If that makes sense...and I'm done with Eleanor too...we'll see if Louis is. :)

@not_any_maryjane

It would make my heart melt if anyone told me they were addicted to me. :)

@ONE DIRECTION LOVE

I was hoping you'd like this chapter!

@Kitten2014

Hahah, yes, it FINALLY happened.

I absolutely love when Olivia and Louis interact! It is the cutest thing ever and i am so so so so so happy that they finally admitted their feelings to each other!!!! They are perfect in more ways then one. I could just see Louis face when Kate admitted everything to him! Adorable! Yay!

@KAOT
AWWW!!!! thay fianlly and i mean finally admitted to liking each other:)
i cant imagine what it feels like for louis to tell u thats hes addicted to you!!
Olivia asking louis if he would be her new daddy was so cute/ sad, I was like how do u respond to that.
All we need now is Louis to finally end things with El, Im so done with her rite now
anyways great update!!! bye xx

He's addicted to her! God, the feels!

YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank God!!!! I thought I was going to have to beat it out of them!!! Ok Louis, time to put your big boy pants on and end things with Bridezilla!!!!

@not_any_maryjane

Now you know I can't allow that to happen...I MUST know how your story plays out first. :)

@Emmy2320

Thank you for your sweet words! I hate when I can't update, so I try to upload a new chapter every morning! Plus I've read quite a few stories where people are updating then just when the stories start getting good, they quit and leave me hanging. So once i start posting a story I vow to continue it until it's done! And I'm a little afraid all my other stories after this one will pale in comparison! Eeks.