Tour!!! - Comments, page 5

UGH It's amaZAYN

@Kassidee Clifford
My name is Tarah.

Haha your welcome
Whats your name?
Maybe I can fit you into the story somehow :)
@MichaelsBabe1914

@Kassidee Clifford
YAY I FEEL SO HELPFUL! TANKS SO MUCH!! UGHHH I'M GONNA CRRRYYYYY!!!

Oh God. You are very imaginitive! I will try to do more chapters of the kids when they are older.
I will also put in someone flirting with Emma.
Thanks for the help guys :)
@Barkeeli
@MichaelsBabe1914

@MichaelsBabe1914


Er mer gerd me too! We gotta keep this going!!!

@MichaelsBabe1914


Er mer gerd me too! We gotta keep this going!!!

Not killing, just dying. 2 totally different things. Or they could go on tour agin when the babies are a bit older and the tour is with 1D and one of them try making a move along the way and blackmail her to keep her quiet and see where that takes you. Or if you dont want 1D to get a bad rep from that idea, you could always have her make her own band and go on tour with 5SOS and see where that takes you. Sorry if my ideas are bad. Just trying to think outside the box.

And Michael can get really jealous.

You could add someone that can be like really mean or like really flirty with Emma.

I will try :)
I just need some more ideas!!

@MichaelsBabe1914

Please DON'T END THE STORY I WOULD BALL MY EYES OUT!! UGHH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

One of the babies should end up dead during child birth. I know it sounds messed up but it'll take a whole new twist on it. it'll keep it going.

YES!! Your amazing! Btw something tragic should happen. Like something not too tragic but enough to break hearts. It'll keep the readers coming. You're doing really good though. They should friggin publish this.

I think I can fit in a Brooke :)
@Barkeeli

I like the name Elodie and Weston/Keaton

Ugh I love it!! Keaton is my favorite boy name!!

Elodie and Keaton are adorbs. Thats what it should be.

Elodie and Keaton are adorbs. Thats what it should be.

Elodie and Keaton are adorbs. Thats what it should be.