STAY AWAY HE'S DANGEROUS - Comments, page 2

@Marry_me_harry

thanks so much for the comment I really needed that right now.i fixing to up date right now matter of fact so be in stand by!!!

Plz update I like it so far(:

@HarrysKitten44
I'm seriously not good at write them I always get bore with them, when u say give more details like how this is my first fanfiction an I want to make it good but have hard time describing and givin more details. Thanks for the advise!!!

I just got your comment on my story, Danger and I have to say that I really like this story so far :) it's not bad at all. I know how hard it is to write a story and no one reviews, trust me. I was like 14 when I first started writing fanfiction and it took me a while to get readers. I'm 18 now and Danger is my first big story. Yeah, I lost a few readers but some stayed and kept reading. I remember when I first started writing someone gave me this tip and I want to give it to you, add a little bit more detail and try to make the chapters longer and then your story will be better (not saying it's bad). I know it's hard but just keep trying. You're a great writer and if you need more advice, please feel free to message me.

Vote comment tell me what you think! Taking ideas to make it better!