Beneath Your Perfect - Comments, page 9

Love it! :)

Update!

Ah please update!

Update sooner please?! X

Awwww! This story is so cool! I've always wanted to learn how to write like this! It makes me think I'm in that persons shoes, saying every word as she would say it. This is REALLY good! Don't stop! <3 :)

Please update soon! I am dying to read this , it's one of my favorite stories

Loveeee this story! You should check out mine!!! An Unexpected Spark

@Elise
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it so much!

Overreacted WAY TO MUCH!! I hope she forgives him!

Yes, I knew Liam had the notebook! Also, totally think Jade overreacted! Their chemistry is too perfect :) please update!

Oh.my.god. Please update sooner then this because I'm obsessed with this story

When do there happen sonthing good to liam an her? :-)

I somewhat knew that it was Liam who had the book, I was just waiting for you to bring it out. But oh my gosh what a chapter. You should maybe do the next chapter to be that he says sorry to her in a very special way and then she starts like talking about how he shouldn't have done that and THEN he kisses her. Gahhhhhhh I love this story please update I can't wait you're and awsome writer! X

I had a feeling Liam had the notebook because it disappeared when he stayed at jades apartment for the night but I don't think it's as big of a deal as jade is making it out to be. He did apologize and you can't really blame him for wanting to no more and read her stories since he didnt know who this stranger was who helped him. Jade does have a right to be a little upset but not like that, she could have just told him it was something personal and private to her other than calling him a theif and being mean. I really hope they fix things because I really wanted them to kiss! I love this story so mucH UPDATE SOON! ;) great work

I love this so much please update soon I'm obsessed

AHH these slow updates are killing me! But the story is so perfect! Update ASAP!

Ah, I love this! I was a huge fan of all three stories that started with Fight For You and I was so upset when they ended, but this one is just as good, if not better! The story is so original, I love it! Please update! :)

Update please! I can't wait for the next chapter, like seriously you're really good. I hope this doesn't sound rude or anything but please don't wait another week to upload a new chapter PLEASE IM BEGGING !x

PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!!!

I love this story I mean like your great at writing and you please check out my fanfiction I have only just posted it but can you read it and give me some tips if so that would be great and the name of it 'Accidental Love' :) it would mean ALOT if you could do to for me xx and can you please Please PLEASEEEE UPDATE?!?!?xx love you and you fanfictions xxxx