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Update maybe like me people are just to lazy to sign in and just want to fall asleep to the story in their head nothing else

I want it to continue but that requires you to update it first.

@iceskatez

Hahah, woopsiedoopsie; you were lucky ;)

I remember a situation of a few years ago, when my one of my best friends and I had a class in a computer room. Of course we weren't doing what we were told to do, but we were googling pictures, for fun... and there was this word; we didn't know what it meant because it was in a foreign language. So my friend said; google it! So I typed the word, pressed enter and; BOOM. A whole page with male genitals
-_-
Guess who walked by? Exactly. The teacher. And just one, one tiny second before he looked at our computer, I pressed 'close'.
We were two very lucky bastards.

@Petra_Austria

Hahah ^^ By too fast, I actually meant the chapter itself ;)
About the details; I liked the idea of keeping it sweet and simple. Not too pornographic, since those two start to love each other more and more, sex becomes less important and making love becomes more important. I personally thought the emotional feelings during the love-making was more important than the physical feelings.

Thanks for being critical, though; I'll try and make the next love scene a little more detailed, when they aren't making love but just having sex ;)

I have no idea how many chapters will come... enough chapters, I guess ^^

X H.

I read this in school lol.
Teacher walked by and I barely switched tabs in time. Oops!

Too fast? are you kidding me? we were waiting 38 chapters for that to happen =)

It was lovely, really sweet, exactly how it should have happened between those too. To be honest, I would have loved to read some more action, a bit more detail, but that's just me.

How many more chapters do you think you'll go from here?

xo Petra

yep

@Savanna and Niall

I'm glad you like it! :)

@Malina Tomlinson

Haha, great! ;)

@Sophie

Ahw thank you... such kind words :) <3

@Mimi_Bell

Yess! Happy to be back :) And I'm glad you liked the chapter!

@JustBCP

Great! :)


Thanks for the lovely comments
X H.

Loved the update

Yayy! You're back!! :) Awesome chapter!

Love the update amazing story and an amazing writer! :) x

Like it. I don't like it.........I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a lovely story so far love i like it.

What a lovely story so far love i like it.

This is amazayn! And I think I may of cried.......BUT I would Love if you could update!

@Petra_Austria

Thanks and you get well soon, too!

I've already written the start from a new chapter, but that was all the inspiration I could find, so I'm saving it on the computer and I'll see when I've got enough inspiration to write some more :)

X H.

Don't worry, I'm feeling the same way too. I'm home sick and would have all the time of the world to write, but I'm just not feeling it.

Get well soon and don't force the writing, you won't like what ends up on the paper.

Hope to hear from you soon though ;-)

@Beauty_Love

Thank you, that's sweet of you :) And I'll take my time, rushing things mostly results in bad chapters.

@perfectionisniall

Me too! I'll be working on it when I'm in a better health and mood and I hope you all will love it!

@Peanut butta and jelly

Haha, love to see your exitement ;) Don't think I'll give this to my teacher(s) though ;)

@Mimi_Bell

Ahw thanks Mimi <3 I'm feeling better since I began taking some medication so hopefully soon I'll be as healthy as a horse again!
( wished I had a horse... )


Thank you all for the sweet messages! It motivates me to write the next chapter soon :)

X H.

Get well soon! :)

Bravo bravo bravo!!!! You should turn this story in for school(Remove the bad other than that you the teacher will love it