They Don't Know About Us - Comments, page 2

cant wait for chapter 9 :) <3

OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD ASDFGHJKL ASDFGHJKL ASDFGHJKL ..... ASDFGHJKL so intense. On another note there's an Ed sheeran fanfic website I want it when you find it thanks babe keep up the fabulous work <3

how r u so goooooooooooo9o99oooooooood at this!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!?

ooooo9ooooooooooooh

I loved this chapter ! I couldn't pity phone down until I finished. So much suspense!

See this is why friends with benefits doesn't work out!!! LOVIN this story!!

omg.... omg.... he said it. fuck. they're both fucked.

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plz plz plz make another one. this chater was kind of short compared to the others.

i loved this chapter! :D
update soon PLEASSSEEEE!?!?!!?!?

loved it! even though I'm surprised Niall didn't want anything in return for the lake-job. car sex? no? okay then :D
anyways, please update soon, I really like reading this and I'm usually never into AU stories.

I love how fast you update and even though I thought it was weird for Niall and her to go to the lake for like 15 mins and not hang after it's still AMAZING (:

PLEASE UPDATE I AM I LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!

FIST FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!

this chapter was awesome! i cant for the update!!!!!!!

I love how fast you updated!! I like it who's the friend ??? I'm so intrigued❤

please please update!!!

Please update!!!!!!

Really. Good. Update!! Please!!! :)

@Ineedlouisd Thank you!!! :D
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