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The end of chapter 28 and the start of 29 well there's more but yeah those are the ones

@Niiccaaeellaa which scene? She hurt them A LOT physically & emotionally :'(

Omg i love this story soooooooo much please please please update soon! ; )

CAN THE NEXT CHAPTER INVOLE HER BEING STABBED OOPS SORRYNOTSORRY

UPDATE IMMEDIATELY PLEASE.

It's my favoriye story. Just love it <3 xx

I was literally crying when Lauren hurt them

I JUST WANT TO FR***IN RIP THAT IDIOT LAUREN'S HEAD OFF HER STUPID BODY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 >:( >:( >:( >:( >:(

Omg Lauren I actually feel sorry for you- clearly you were dropped on your head a lot as a baby

@malikChick27 abhhahahaha that made me laugh so hard! :D

@Princess.Sparkle
Oh believe me it could be a zombie apocalypse and they would still be fighting haha

Like Harry To Had Realized What He Was Doing And Realized It Wasnt Sammie, Sobered Up And Vuallla!! Happy Family And He Wouldve Told Sammie She Would Beat Her Ass And Then Bam Bitch Is Fired

No come on no please no no no no

@Elsie_Salinas thanks :) what did u expect the story to turn out ?

@malikChick27 ouhh u have twins sibling that are also 4!? Wow thats rad! ...In the beginning of the story there were scenes were they argued & fought for their parents attention, which is what young kids do. But I think for most of the scene I've portrayed them as caring & looking out for one another. I think this is more evident especially when Lauren came in the picture. xx :)

I Just Wanna Scream In Frustration Because This Story Is So Not What I Wanted It To Be Like:(
But Yu Still Are An Amazing Write

Holy fuck shit is hitting the fan

what the fuck im like going crazy and pull out my goddamn hair why are you doing this to use and omg you need to make this things longer im going CRAZY

WHA-BU-SHE-HOW-WHA-LAUREN YOU LITTLE ****ING B**** IMMA KILL YOU!!!! EVEN THOUGH YOUR NOT REAL IM STILL GONNA KILL YOU!!!!

alright. I'm done ranting.....for now. Wow your an amazing writer! I can't wait for the next update

I like love ur story bt I find the twin part kinda amusing cuz I have 4 year old twin sisters and they don't really act like the styles twins,well a little bit, but they're not as mature and they're always fighting anyway update soon.