When Darkness Falls - Comments

@GabbyB
I will try today sorry i haven't been keeping up with updating I will be sure to make this one long to

Please hpdate

Wow Louis nice move. You fucking scared the girl

@Niallsgirl1
Ya figured that out

Lorelyn I think that's the wrong story

@Niallsgirl1
Ha

Mona and Niall left to be.alone ;) ;)

Mona and Niall left to be.alone ;) ;)

@Niallsgirl1
Okay

I already know what they should buy for each other.

God dammit now I gotta think of ship names.

Hmmm...

Suke?
Sluke?
Skyluke?

Lylar?
Luklar?


God I fucking suck at ship names.

Lol nice chapter


Now you MUST fucking update!

@Niallsgirl1
No prob

@Niallsgirl1
I know just didnt wanna put her in

I nearly died on the part

"And Mona is my girlfriend." Niall says.

And Liam has a girlfriend. Get name is Sophia Smith. Just she's a slut. So I avoid her.

Niall what the hell.

"No worries. At least you don't try to rape me."

That gave me so many ideas. I can't even think straight.

Hehe.

That song is bootyful.

Tank you for giving me credit. In the characters

@Savanna and Niall
Thx <3

Love da update!

@Savanna and Niall
yes!

So you will update?!

@Savanna and Niall
okay anything to make yall happpy!