Show Me Where it Hurts - Comments, page 2

@Delilah

Do you know when you will be making your tumblr? I'm so excited!

@Delilah
It breakd my heart to hear that!:,( I really hope he gets better soon!

@Rookie
i know, it’s such a shame that it got deleted! and RE: your previous comment, you can follow me on my fan twitter if you like: harrystylesism :)

@not_any_maryjane
i’ve just read it! I really like it!

@Paige_Styles
yeah, friday he was fine! but apparently last night he was a bit rough again.. i think someone said he sounded like he was losing his voice again :(

Was alright Harry when you went to see them on Friday? I know he wasn't singing at a couple of shows last week because of some throat problems but was he singing at the show you went to??

So....how much could i possibly miss in 30 chapters? That summary indicates a LOT! Can't wait to start reading!

I love Fan Fiction where Harry and Louis are very close because, I don't know, I don't feel it anymore and it's sort of sad. So many things lately. I'm rambling.

I love your writing so I can't wait to see what's next. New beginnings.

If you want to check I just posted what I told you about last time. People like you put so many energy and love into this, well, I'm kind of paying a tribute to everyone around 1D's Fan Fiction. Hope you find it funny.

Thank you again for sharing your work!!!

Aw, that chapter was cute. It makes me such a bad person but I am glad that will died, well killed himself. After everything he did to Annie & Will. Really sad that this story is over :(
cant wait for what you're gonna write next! :D

Omg i was crying in the begining when i thought she died!

@not_any_maryjane
thank you! that’s so lovely to say! I do love what his character became, i’m so glad you all do too!

I must say it's hard to say goodbye to your Harry Styles, for me literally the best one around. I loved what you did on the ten first chapters of 'Things...' and you carried him on perfectly.

I'll honour your stories as the best HarryStyles' Fan Fiction of all on something I'm writing to post sometime soon. Thanks so much for sharing. Hope you keep writing. Have fun with the boys!

@AEW_19
thank you so much for supporting it all the way! never mind me continuing, I was just worried that people would lose interest after it was deleted but you’ve all been amazing!

i’m sure after seeing Harry & the boys next week at WWA I will have a lot of inspiration haha.

What a way to end it! I was on eggshells wondering about Annie's fate! Thank you for writing two brilliant stories centering around this awesome couple. An even bigger thank you for continuing w/ the story after a majority of it got deleted.
I'm looking forward to whatever other stories you will write in the near future!

@moonaddict
literally thank you so much for your words! i love writing these stories but they’re really just an escape and a hobby and something for me to do, i often finish chapters and feel like they aren’t great or I could have done better so for you to say something like that is crazy. I’ve never thought my writing was that good so thank you and everyone for telling me it is, for sticking through it all!

I feel like Harry’s character is never truly portrayed very well and I’ve always wanted to try and do that. It’s funny because when I started writing about him I didn’t know him as well as I do now and I think you can see the progression of my understanding of him as both stories go on. he is a very interesting person to write about, very complex! I will definitely write another story in the future!

You should write a sequel to this. I love your writing.

I just wanted to tell you how much I loved these two stories.
I've read so many stories and I can clearly say, that you are the best writer I ever stumbled across. You write beautifully and you really know how to build up tension.
Whenever you give us a cliffhanger, the solution to it is never as expected and that's what defines a good writer.
Also you have an amazing way of creating characters with real personalities. You give them an edge and that's what makes them so authentic.
I felt so bad for you when your story got deleted and I still admire how you got up and continued this story. That is remarkable.
I absolutely adore the way you write and I think you have so much futher to go, I really believe that.
The storys ending was brilliant. I had a few tears running down my cheeks - not just because of the beautiful chapter, but also because of Annie and Harry and how their story ended. I'm so pleased with it, so thank you so much for this wonderful story.
I'd like to know what happened to Will though. Did he go to jail? Or is he still out there? It would be great if you could write an extra chapter on that issue.
I'm looking forward to any new stories from you. I'm sure they will be as incredible as these two were, if not even better!
Thank you so much for every single word. :)

@Icecle123
i haven’t made one yet! i only have a personal atm but i’ll post it up with all the info asap

SHE DIDNT DIE HELL YEAH
and what did louis and el name their baby? :))

@Delilah
Yes pleaaaaaaaseeeeeeeee
i can't get enough of Harry & Annie :|
really sad that it's over :(