Secrets / Black & White / Playing for Keeps - Comments, page 28

It's good but it's a little confusing to me since it's in 3rd person.

@Astyles
Yay- thanks Astyles :)!

@Angelica

Yeah she seems to have a complicated relationship with Ben, doesn't she? Harry needs to get his act together! :D Thanks for your comment Angelica :)

Great chapter. It seems they're drifting and Ben and her are getting closer.. I really hope she doesn't forget that he tried to rape her! Lol.. And that her harry stop sneaking around cuz soon it will turn into resentment and or leave a bad taste in one of their mouths.. He should just be brave and profess his love for her publicly and forget what Julian thinks just this once! In my opinion. Lol

I am!!! Loving it!

@BulletproofLove

Yay!! Thank you BulletproofLove, that is great to hear

@Tiedyelover06
Same here! I love this story :D

@Angelica

Yeah, she should play a bit hard to get :) We'll see if that starts to happen in future chapters. Thank you so much for commenting, it's nice to hear from people reading the story :)

@Tiedyelover06
Wow- you just put a big smile on my face... thank you so much :)

That chapter literally had me jumping. Omfg I hate Ben! They just need to be together with no boundaries. I can't take it! Please update soon! This is one of the best stories I have read In a long time.

That was a really good chapter. I wonder if she's gonna start to get a bit distant considering what you said about her feeling the bitterness bubbling in her.. Make him appreciate her more!

@Angelica

Thanks Angelica :) I can see where you're coming from regarding the lack of depth in their relationship... the problem is this story is kind of pre-written, so I can't change it now :) I hope that you still enjoy it for what it is... but I totally understand what you mean. In hindsight, I should have spent more time on them developing a friendship too. Thanks for taking the time to comment, and hope that you enjoy the rest of the story :)

I literally check every day for a new chapter. Lol. But I guess if there's anything i could suggest. Id like to see them build a friendship. Besides the sex and forced dates.. There's not much more depth to the development of their relationship it seems. Besides the obvious.

@SimmerDown

Thanks SimmerDown, glad to see you're enjoying it :)

It's really good!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!! <3

So glad you liked it LadyLu- and so nice to get a comment about my story- thank you!

OH MY GOD this chapter was so good! I absolutely love this story! I love that Harry is starting to pick up on Ben and how creepy he is being with Lara. Can't wait for the next chapter girl!

@onedirectionareperfect

ThankYou! I will be updating soon... thanks for reading :)

This is so so good, can't wait for the update!!!

@visukiki
Yay! That's pretty cool- thanks for letting me know. So glad you stumbled across my story. :)