Secrets / Black & White / Playing for Keeps - Comments, page 24

@Angelica
Ooh I'm glad you liked the end of that chapter, because I wasn't that sure about it when I originally wrote it. But I guess the whole shades of grey talk goes to show that nothing in life is black and white. There will be more Lara & Louis in upcoming chapters!

This chapter was a relief.. I can agree that there is so much grey in this situation... I'm starting to route for harry again. But I know in the grand scheme of things my reaction was probably your aim in those previous chapters! Lol. Great add on at the end of that chapter! Still very excited to see how louis and Lara's relationship develops..

@Angelica
It's about time we found out!! :)

@ohhboybands
All will be revealed... :) (in the next chapter of course)

Wait! What does he mean by discovery!?!

Who the hells sky!

@Wildcats

Aw thanks Wildcats... we'll just have to wait and see ;) :)

I love it Please make them couple I am waiting for it

@ohhboybands

Aw ohhhbobands- thank you! I'm glad you liked the flashbacks... I'll be doing more of that in future chapters. :)

Loved this chapter! I loved all the little memory moments, it worked so well with the story and was a good reminder of who they are now, verses then. :)

@ohhboybands

Haha yay!! :) I'm glad you're enjoying the Louis and Lara interaction!

@Angelica

Wow, thanks for that, it was interesting to read your thoughts. I guess this story is turning out to be darker than 'Secrets'... nothing seems to be black and white... which I guess is why I called it 'Black & White' (!)
I still have a soft spot for Harry (haha) but yep Ben does suck and yep Lara does need stability. The crazy thing is that she's now starting to become dependent on Louis... so we'll see how *that* goes.
I'm glad you still like the story though. Thanks so much for taking the time to comment. :)

I think it's because I was routing so much for him. I think I believed he was gonna be the neutral zone in all the mess. And it's not like I didn't expect him to make mistakes, but now he's purposely messing around, seems he doesn't care about Lara as much anymore considering he only calls her over for sex and than he never does anything special for her and keeps her locked up but will be spotted out with randoms... I thought this time around they might make things right.. I love this story though, don't get me wrong! I can't get enough. Just don't know who to route for anymore. Lol, Ben sucks, harry is starting to suck, and Lara needs some freaking stability in her life! Lol. & yea she was miss independent because she didn't want harry helping her with certain things and only eventually warned up to it. Now she's become completely dependent on Ben.. And dependent on Harry's love, which is really just sex.. Idk if I'm wrong, does anyone agree?

Oh crap! The scene with Louis and Lara, was great! And now Harry's back and Claire caught Ben, and just ahhh! The cliffhangers always get to me! And you know I can't wait for more!

@Angelica

Out of curiosity can I ask why you think he's annoying and why you don't think he deserves her? It would be interesting to hear why :) thanks

@Angelica

Hmmm... I think Lara has changed a lot since the first story. It's interesting that you thought of her as Miss Independent... but having said that, there were moments when she was.

And harry is starting to annoy me, so not what i expected.. I feel like he no longer deserves her.

I miss Lara being Miss Independent..

@Everso
Totally weird, but Louis knows Lara now and she definitely isn't the same girl she was back then. Plus they can bond over drugs now, which is something Lara can't really do with Harry.

@ohhboybands

:) It's kind of weird isn't it? (considering the relationship they had in 'Secrets'.