The Bodyguard. - Comments, page 3

@Maxinator
im writing the next chapter now! thanks so much.<3
and i love your name haha

Really love the story, mate. Keep writing you are amazing at it. Please update. I so can't wait for the next chapter.

@NarryLover123
^^^

More her an nial!!!!

Update soon please this is so good and her and niall are soo cute I think she should start developing strong feelings for Niall too :)

Her and Niall! Like I think yess!

I love the parts with her and nial!! Do those and more frequently please!!!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!

update. upde, update!! lol ! I loveee it!

@VASHAPPENIN1D
awe yay glad to hear. :3

Omg I love this story so much <3

@PAULINEmariah
thats great to hear because I really think I'm horrible at a guys POV. lol. so thank you(:

@Sam!
Please update!!!!
i would like to say that after reading a couple of other stories, I realized how good u were at a guy's POV

Sorry I posted the blank one. My iPad was just freaking out! Lol

@OneDirectionPrincessB
what is confusing you?

I'm totally lost.

@Sam!
Hey, anytime. It's nice that you have a flair for writing.
Your welcome, it is my pleasure. I will comment more later when more chapters come!

@PAULINEmariah
oh my god, you are amazing for writing that all out! thank you sosososo much, this means a lot!
and yes, the part about her parts being broken is going to be brought up again soon. (:
im glad im doing well and this definitely makes me want to update sooner. :D
thank you again<3

PLEASE READ @Sam!
you said that these comments inspire you; therefore, I have an honest report on "The Bodyguard"
KEEP WRITING

first of all, it is a rating of 10!!!!

the first chapter is a great introduction with the cliff hanger at the end leaving us wandering what was " the accident"

i would also also like to say I love how you revealed who max was and when you divulged her secrets. Every time I read this I get a clear picture in my head because of your wording and imagery.

in addition, it is a beautiful, unexpected relationship and situation. "The academy? I didn't know she meant bodyguard!" (Something like that). It's not predictable at all. It's not like " oh this situation is so rare and unrealistic". This is just amazing.

it is also relatable(good). For example, the way max and Harry get jealous of each other is adorable and common.

Now, I have a question. In the first chapter, it say that max is having sex with jake and they are using condoms. However, later in the chapters with max having sex with Harry, she states that her parts are broken. What? How? Will this be revealed later? Or is it a mix up. I don't know. I just thought it was kind of important. I don't mean to be picky. I still think it's worth 10 stars !!


I really hope you UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! Have a great summer!!!!!!