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Study of Life and Love - Comments, page 15
@The Renegade
My procrastination certainly didn't allow for this chapter to be on time haha!
Glad you enjoyed the last chapter :) I remember you saying you like Indi, so she's up next and I have many plans :D
So good to find a University AU instead of a high school for a necessary change. Looking forward to your next update!
PS: I feel so identified with Thea it's scary. I puked a lot on my first year in college for a pair of brown eyes. I'm doing way better since then :) Your story is wonderful, a bit hard on the beginning because you set a lot of characters and chapters are long, but it grows on you because it's different and full of details. You know, most people are looking for conventional stories on One Direction. You are clever so you don't want any sort of readers but good readers. I'm looking for good readers too and I know a few of them around here so I'll let them know about your story.
This was a pretty amusing chapter, with a few adorable moments (mostly from Niall) :).
Seems like all of the relationships are getting a move on, in one way or another. I can't wait for the next chapter, assuming your procrastination allows for it ;P
@The Renegade
Wow I am so utterly embarrassed about that last spelling mistake with writing/righting. Just wow no words for that one :P haha
I'm so happy that you're intrigued with Indi! I'm having a little trouble with her because her story line is more dramatic then the other girls (well so far anyway) and I'm trying to make sure I don't make her too dramatic, or cliche or unrealistic but I'm slowly working my way through building her character and life to something that I was first aiming for :)
And thank you for taking those twenty minutes to post a comment when clearly the site didn't want you to! haha
@ImpulsiveFreedom
I'm hoping that you had to do a lot of correcting in Indiana's last chapter so that you were indeed "righting" it XD.
Well, for someone who doesn't know much about soccer, you made the game sound perfetly realistic, so kudos to you there :).
Despite the chapter being about Caydance (and oh man did she get herself into a bit of a situation by the end :P) I still feel very intrigued by even just the brief mentions of Indiana's hidden self. I've said it before and I'll say it again, you really do have a very polished, professional writing style :)
PS: This comment just took me about 20 minutes to post. The site kept logging me out, or telling me "The connection to the server has been reset". :/
@The Renegade
Thank you! I loved righting Indiana's last chapter!!
And I've been trying to write like mad to get ahead of myself with stories, so I might be able to start updating more then once a week while I'm on holidays :)
OHHHH! I love this story! Plus you updated on my birthday! best present ever! (Even if it was unintentional) sooooo ready for the next chapter.
Excellent chapter to come back on! I do love Indiana's part of the story, she's a very interesting character :)
Can't wait for the up-coming month of updates from you :D (We missed you more than you missed us!)
@The Renegade
Ah I'm so sorry, this is what happens when people assume ;P haha but the error is all fixed!
Glad you liked the chapter, the spying and the pulling Thea in the bushes was my favourite part to write. It never changed from the first draft :P
Haha and thank you! I've been thinking about posting this story to other sites as well! (I'll still post on here) but just to get more viewers and feedback! So maybe like Wattpad or something :D
@ImpulsiveFreedom
Quick correction to your Author's note: The Renegade has been amazing with his feedback :P. But thank you! I try my best to give thoughtful responses :).
It was a good chapter - gets the ball rolling for Louis + Thea (I want to say Leah but that's already a name :P). It is very Louis-like to be spying on Niall's date though. I hope you don't have too much heartbreak planned for Thea, I would feel very bad for her :(.
Unfortunately I don't really have any suggestions for you to improve your viewer/subscriber counts. I'd advertise if I had any stories of my own. All I can really do though is shake my proverbial stick from down here in the comments: c'mon people, get your acts together and subscribe - this story is amazing :D.
@not_any_maryjane
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. I personally wanted to read a University AU for ages but there is barely any so I thought I would just write my own!
And I am so sorry to hear about your pair of brown eyes but I'm glad you are better. I think we all at one stage have one relationship or just a crush that we sometimes take too far and it can ruin us so I think you will see that discourse in both Riley and Thea, but they grow stronger from this of course!
And I'm glad it grew on you. I found it hard myself to write the start and try to give as much information as well as do it in a gradual way and I'm always unsure how well I did that!
And I thank you so much for offering to tell people! (Also I will totally check out your stories too)
Thanks for commenting by the way and I'm so glad you decided to read my story :)
7/30/14