Do I Frighten You? - Comments, page 9

Wow! I wonder how weird they feel talking about all this. Like hey you're my sister but it really hurt my feelings when you were kissing another guy because I liked you. Their parents should be very disappointed in themselves. Loved this chapter by the way!! :)

@Directioner-stagram
No like this convo happened over text and not in person

@NikkiRozaye!
Well, What do you mean? A chapter of text? or just type paragraphs, If so me.

Really this happened over text?? Who would write so much over text?

@Jacie
Aww thank you

Omg it's a boy!!! I love this story!!! I hope nothing goes wrong!! You're an amazing writer!! :)

@Amnesia
That is good.

@Directioner-stagram
Yeah I get it

@Tenni Horan
Omg, Thank you. :)

This is my favorite fanficion.

@NikkiRozaye!
Yeah, I understand and that is why I am editting my stories, to make them longer, and I don't think that i could go back and put more chapters within chapters, if so. I would.

@Directioner-stagram
Lol you are! You to just to work to be an even greater writer and that requires being realistic about your priorities and time....im not trying to shut you down or anything just friendly advice

@NikkiRozaye!
But I really want to be a writer.

@Directioner-stagram
I was a senior last year when I started my story so trust me I know how it feels and I was the manager of my bball team and captain of the dance team so it gets very fucking hectic but I am just saying you do not want to overload yourself and then regret not giving something your full attention when you coukd have whether it be an essay, learning notes or this story. My biggest regret was not focusing when I should have so just throwing it out there because itb is double the work to reread the story and then change it for more detail

@NikkiRozaye!
I know, but I for only two hours and then I come home and I am tired. and then Saturday that is my whole day. and that is about it. I just am wanting to graduate, cause I am a senior and all and I have to start doing homework and stuff, And I am just trying to do this story around my schedule and it is sort of working out. I just need a little more time for the story and I am doing that right about now.

Maybe yoy should finish band first so you have time to focus on the story and give it your all

@Amnesia
I am sorry, i just haven't put all the characters up yet, I put the mains, so people could know what they looked like. You know?

@Directioner-stagram
I just looked at her character list thing and only seen 1 guy 1 girl and Harry and Niall but okay just saying

@Amnesia
What? 5sos is in the story.

@Directioner-stagram
welcome Love.x. c: <3