Do I Frighten You? - Comments, page 13

nah that bitch can go to hell!!!!!! she has put Amelia and harry through enoguh!!! :)

@Directioner-stagram
im serious can't they just have a normal life xD

You update this fast lol :P

@NARRY_FOR_LIFE
HAHAHA XD

I am sorry. Truly.

im really hating this cause they can't ever be okay theres always something wrong then jess, then her dad thing and now that stupid killer or whatever he is!!!

@Mimi_Bell
Lol, You're going a good job. XD

@Directioner-stagram
Lol, thanks. I try. I try my best.

@Luke's forever and always
I am really working on doing so, I I am editing my chapters to make them more detailed and fixing errors, and I am going to have someone go over it and then I am going to publish it.

@Mimi_Bell
Hahah, You are funny xD

He'll yes you definitely should publish it

Oh my gosh!! I can't deal. Ajdjss kkdushdnf kaksiuebrjfid !!!

@NikkiRozaye!
Yeah, I had put some more detail in the first chapter a few days ago, and I am working to make everything more detailed and punctuation more clear. I had started writing this story at a younger age, and now, I think reading the stories that inspired me, gave me better english. LOL I don't know xD

Informal*

The chappies are a bit too short to be a book and the wording is a bit too formal but it could make it if you tried it and revised it enough with the he of an editor or English professor.

@NikkiRozaye!
Hahah, Alright.

@Directioner-stagram

hmmmm makes sense now..i was actually mad at my mom because of her mom...i should probably apologize now ... after i write a chappie

Lol. Well good job. Mission accomplished. :)

@Mimi_Bell
Haha, That is what I was aiming for. xD

Lol. I definitely thought they were about to rob the place.

@Mimi_Bell
Thank you :)