Amateur - Comments

@bellajayne
Haha I passed out in front of my softball team once, so there's where I got that idea. Also, thank you for commenting on my story. At least I know someone's enjoying it haha.

poor devon :( I've had days like that but at least she gets to come home to sand furniture not dirty blue furniture and jizz colored walls hahaha

@Mylalaland
Haha, my family's a bit like that too. It's great that you pull inspiration from your own life. That's how the best writing happens usually.

@asheybabe
I will definitely keep writing this story. I'm so excited to share it all with you<3

@bellajayne
Hahaha I love making Devon have such an interesting humor, and I'm glad you're enjoying that as well. Thanks for reading yet another one of my stories<3

@Corinne Elizabeth
I loved the Devon and Niall moment as well. There will be more of that in the future(;

@ourboysRthebest
I love Devon's family to, but that's probably because I made them similar to mine haha. My dad is exactly how I made Devon's and my mother is always telling me not to encourage him hahaha.

@Sheniqua...
I can guarantee that the first chapter will mostly not be the longest one haha, so you'll have another even longer chapter to read soon. I love Devon because she's basically me. I felt like making a character that had all of my bad experiences, mixed with many made up ones, would be so relate-able and fun to read, so I'm glad that you can connect with her. And thank you for the compliments. <3

@iHarryStyles
You better :P

Finally going to catch up ^.^ lol

Awe I love the friendly moment between Niall and Devon. So cute. and maybe now Devon can control Harry's randomness

Hooray for getting your laptop back! I love Devon's family so much, haha. They're really funny! And I like that this is starting to progress even more. Great update love! :)

Okay so let's start with chapter 1 was probably the longest chapter I have ever read! I loved it it's really really good!! Devon is so unique and I feel like I can relate to her so well:) I love this story and cannot wait to keep reading:)
i read mistreated so I already know your an amazing writer but I'll tell you anyways...
your an amazing writer:):)

Everyone has those moods. I hope you feel better soon :) Get some rest if you haven't already by the time you see this! Anyway, this chapter doesn't suck. Like I said before, you are fantastical at developing characters. I'm loving Louis' character so far. Great job love!

Haha Louis is so goofy! Haha I can't deside whether I like Tate or Harry more. Just gotta keep reading

Loved it and I can't wait for the next update!

Loving it so far! You are really great at developing characters :)

I had to stop reading to wipe away my tears when i got to the bit where she says 'blue ballers' haha too funny my friend, too funny! This is amazing much like everything else you write. Can't wait to see more xx

Yay a new story to read!!!! I can't wait to read more!

Jessica, TwinkleTits, Picky Eater, Eight is a snowman and Five is a hook,

Oh my god this book is amazing, even though i haven't gotten to your favorite part yet. Remember: immm aaa sloowww reeadderr.

But this should be a book and a movie already. New favorite story right here. SO excited to see what happens. Keep up the amazing work (Like Always) !

-DickPickle