Secrets With My Step Brother**UNDER EXTREME EDITING!** - Comments, page 2

I love this story!!

Is the baby gonna be named Darcy?

How long has is been?

I really love this story please update

So how many more hours do I have to wait? X

I can't wait for the update. X

Oh no she is having second thoughts but I think she will come through... :)

omg
this shit is adorable

I agree with Loveit. Everyone needs a little criticism. I hate when people act like that. She's only trying to help.

@briannalovesniall.

A little critism is good, it shows and helps on what you should improve on. I was not telling you how to write your story but just saying it is a little hard to understand. that's all no need to get mad at me.

Please don't take this offensively but can you make the chapters longer

I love the show full house

Aww the onesie is adorable

Aww the onesie is adorable

Aww the onesie is adorable

@Loveit

tbh...i hate when people try to offend my story and tell me how i should write MY story. No offense though.

@Bmo_Tomlinson

OMG!! THANKS FOR LETTING ME KNOW!!!!

Could you try if please don't take a offense try when they talk do this.
"hi" said bob rolling his eyes.
" Sorry did I bother you" said Kiki looking concerned into his eyes.
i mean it shows who is talking and it's easier to understand. I'm a scholar writer at my school.
just trying to help love. But your story has a great p.o.v of being pregnant and how rough iy can be.

YOUR STORY IS FIRST ON THE POPULAR PAGE! But I have no idea how long, but the last time I looked at the popular page, it wasn't there. :P BUT UTS ON THE POPIYLAR PAGE! :D

Please Update!! I love this story so much to a point where it's probably unhealthy!!