Notorious - Comments, page 5

@ID Equals A dose of Herpes
I think it's the lack of separated paragraphs and the over extended ellipses that got to me! And that's just how I speak because I'm from the North. But say what you want as long as some people are enjoying the plot that's what matters :)

@ScarletCanBurn
Horrendously written? There are a few typos, but at least I know basic grammar. And the site won't let me edit it. And how can you criticise me when you say "was took in by Liam"? You don't have to go anywhere besides your own story if you want terrible writing, love ;)

@ID Equals A dose of Herpes
Actually I gave your story 4 stars, because although it is horrendously written, I do think the entire idea of it is hilarious!

@ScarletCanBurn
I know, I spend my life making excellent points. And feel free to down vote my story, you're only giving me the reaction I wanted ;)

@ID Equals A dose of Herpes
Hmm excellent point, knock yourself out.

@ScarletCanBurn
I do have a place, freedom of speech. Everyone has the right to comment on your story if they desire to.

@Swiftioner136
Thank you so much :* lots of love, Scar!x

@ID Equals A dose of Herpes
This is true, I do make mistakes however as i have stated many times i write late at night when i cant sleep and therefore i do not notice my mistakes because of lack of concentration! However, if you arent interested in my story you really have no place being here. Go find an argument somewhere else.

@ScarletCanBurn
And in your OC's character description you put "was took in by Liam". Don't be a hypocrite a correct me on my grammar when you can't out basic grammar in your story. It's supposed to be "was taken in by Liam", but since you didn't receive an education, you wouldn't know that, would you, and then in your reply to me there's a grammactical error? You're a hypocritical, idiotic moron.

@ScarletCanBurn
It's deliberate, duh. And I don't see how you can correct me on my grammar when there is unnecessary capitals in your name and you don't know the difference between "there" and "their".

@ScarletCanBurn
It's deliberate, duh.

@ID Equals A dose of Herpes
Your asshole may know basic grammar but you clearly do not, considering their is an unnecessary capital letter in your name.

@Swiftioner136
No it's not. You want amazing? My asshole is more amazing than this story because at least my asshole knows basic grammar.

UPDATE PLS!I love this story it's so amazing

@ScarletCanBurn
If they torture her, or kill her, I might die.

@ScarletCanBurn
If they torture her, or kill her, I might die.

@Baestyles
Thank you so much, I will asap x

@BiggKay
Aww thank you so much, what bit killed you love? Haha x

THIS STORY IS AMAZING! Please update

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