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Is this the end?

Are you done with this story?

Emily=5

Elliott=2

Emily - 1
Elliot - 7
:)

Your story is amazing!!!(:
Emily- 1,2,5 or 8
Elliot- 2,5, or 6

i kinda like the first person better, but the other way is good too. great story :)

Emily- 1 or 8
Elliot- 6

its more descriptive this way but i think its easier to read when its in 1st person but the story is great so far keep it up x

@sjbudowski
Oh are you kidding, I am so enjoying this story!!! I love the story I think you are very talented, keep it up love!

@Jasyjas18

Thank you for the feedback! I will keep that in mind, I am trying to figure out which way to continue and I really appericiate your comments. Thank you so much, I hope you are enjoying :)

I personally like the first person pov better, but if it's is easier on you to write 3rd person I understand!!! Amazing chapter by the way!!

Keep it goin'!

MOAR

Ahhhhh I love this story you are an amazing writer

awwwwwww....
cute chapter!!
this is a great story!!
keep it coming!!

I love this story I was reading it and my dad asked me if i was ok please don't stop this story

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww

I'm on the floor balling right now so. Thank you? But really great story sad but great.

This is an amazing story!! I can't wait to see what happens next with Harry and Emily.

Tho is such a good story!!