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@The Renegade
Ah thanks for pointing out that mistake! I re-wrote the sentence so many times coz I kept wording it weirdly and then I still missed something haha :P
Oh thats okay hun! I completely understand, I don't always expect you to comment, you're amazing enough to comment as much as you do! :)
I'm thinking you are kind of right, we have kind hit the part right before the turning point. There might be a few more curve balls but it was slowly lift from here.. Promise :)
Right near the top: "By Jen’s she had caught my rolls of eyes..."
I think that's supposed to read "By Jen's look...". Or I'm reading it wrongly.
Sorry for killing your comments! Or, more correctly, as I was the main person making comments, sorry for letting your comments fade into nothing! I've been a bit out of it lately and mainly just quickly checking the site for updates. But I'm still here and your story is still fantastic and worth updating quickly :D *nudge*
I like the feel of this chapter: we've hit (or are getting very close to) a low point, from which things are sure to turn around with a bang, or a twist. I look forwards to the next few chapters :).
Bah, who am I kidding, I'm looking forwards to all of them :P
@cloudyskye
Wow thank you for reading so much so quickly! :) I'm glad you love it that much. I planned this story out for so long, even had the sequel planned before I started writing the first so it means a lot that you appreciate and think it's well written. Thanks love! xx
Today I read the entire first story as well as catching up to where you've updated on this one. Can I just say how in love with it I am? It is so refreshing to read something so well written and with such an interesting and different plot line!! The story is absolutely incredible, probably easily one of my favorites I've ever read! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the update :)
@The Renegade
Thanks as always for reading and I hope you have listened to Ed's album. Literal perfection right there :P (I may be hyping it up too much but I haven't listened to anything but his album since it came out!)
Hope you enjoy this new chap! :)
@ImpulsiveFreedom
Yeah I've heard it called by a few different names before, including "What's the time Mr Wolf", but obviously "Grandma's Footsteps" fit the bill in this case :P
*reads chapter*
I will have to take your suggestion and listen to Ed's new album :).
I actually don't have much to say about that chapter, apart from the fact that it was great, like always. Time to look forward to the next one, I guess :P
@The Renegade
Ah I hope you did well in that last exam! And I hope you didn't run out of tea then! I can be a tea person sometimes but while studying I need straight coffee on constant supply!
I actually have no idea what 'Grandma's Footsteps' is so I googled it and where I'm from we actually call that game "What's the time Mr Wolf" Its basically the same with a few minor changes :P - but I love your connecting them to the story haha ;P
@ImpulsiveFreedom
Hah, I actually laughed out loud at your comment :P. I'm more of a tea person myself, but I do enjoy a good coffee from time to time :). Last exam tomorrow, here's hoping ^_^
Now, onto the actual chapter:
"I don’t care what that Simon has to say." - Oh dear. Forget the game "Simon Says" we're playing "Grandma's Footsteps" now :P :P
Excellent chapter :D
@zaynisthebestest
Thank you for the good luck!
And I'm so glad you are loving everything in! And well there is a bit of happiness right now but give me about two or three chapters to change all that... you might not want Louis to listen to that song yet.... - and that is all the hinting I shall give you today haha, thanks for trusting me love! xx
@ImpulsiveFreedom
Really good chapter please update soon! x
8/14/14