Use Somebody - Comments, page 4

LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!

Update soon please!!!

Update

lickmeliam it is ok i understand that is why i use a program that fixes grammer automaticly and spelling and here is one of my srories titles read it if you want it is called No emotional attachments

@Adrianna Bolt
well, love, I am sorry that I hurt you, and I really mean that! I was just trying to spare you from future pain by telling you the truth. I'm very protective of the things I love and this story just so happens to count as such. Doesn't mean you should give up on yourself. Being a good writer takes years of practise, and the abiltiy to take criticism. Don't let harsh words get you down. You're stronger than that! And I'm sorry once again, but I really didn't mean to make you sad. Just look at your writing and hers, and I bet you can see the difference ;)

Omgehhhh can not wait to see what happens!!!

I'm in love with this one.. I might've said that a couple times already but I JUST LOVE IT!!!

@lickmeliam just saying not to be disrespectful doese not mean it is not that comment hurt so bad it amost made me want to.. well lets just say i am trying to get over a minor case of depprssion and i used to suffacate mysarlf so this website helped me with that by not getting bullied for sucking at grammar but that coment made me want to do it again here read this quote " Before you judge people, judge youself" -Zayn Malik

Do not quit cause you have no reviews you will always have mine and that is a promise

What is the main character name the giril

Love it.

@Adrianna Bolt
I don't mean any disrespect, but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do not mess with this story! It's perfect the way it is and by getting the OC pregnant this would turn out to be just another stupid carrot story. And also please, girl, have you heard about grammar? And punctuation? And spelling? No way you could ever write a story like that. Sorry, but that's the truth... this story is perfect and no one should mess with it!

@Mrs_Horaaan wow, just... wow! what an amazing story! the plot is original, nothing's too much to deal with it, the character DEVELOPMENT is given, and overall: just, wow! and you can write those steamy scenes, guuuuuuurl! got hot in here for a minute! please update!

well if you need somone to continue then i am always here. You are amazayn atour and people who aren't reading your story are complety dumb people more or less some people don't read these kind of things and i have a suggestion for the story that Cassie finds out she is pregnant and has to gie up the job i iceland and go on from there it is just a suggestion

@mylittleirishmanniall
lol... yeah, I think in the beginning that was sort of my intention, since I was a bit of a Louis girl at first as well... but then Cassie found Harry, and I dunno... they sort of happened, it just... wrote itself, really :) and I'll update right now, promise, cause you guys are so frikkin amazing!

@Adrianna Bolt
oh, wow, what a message... first of all: thanks! it feels so unbelievably good to get such positive feedback on here! I didn't get much on the bigger sites, and I was thinking about quitting the story, but something always kept me going... second thing: i'm so happy that you don't want it to end, but let me tell you: there are still at least 7 chapters to come, and A LOT OF STUFF IS GONNA GO DOWN, so maybe (eventually, perhaps) the 'end' will leave all of you satisfied and you won't feel the need to continue it? besides, I'm leaving out tons of stuff now, so there's always room to add chapters later on... for example, Demi and Niall's first date... so, sit back, enjoy the ride, thanks so much for reading, and let's just see where Cassie and Harry take us ;)

@KiaraMariex
I am so sorry! I will try to fix it, though! Promise!

i love this sooo much! please update update update update update update update update update update update update update update updateupdate update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update P.S. when i first started to read i totally thought cassie was gonna end up with louis still hoping they might get together!

Can i ask you if you are going to stop writeing if i can take over so that the story will keep on goin and that you can write another one and if i write something you don't like you can talk to me and i will change it or i can run it by you first @ Mrs_Horaan cause i can not bare to see this story end at a place like this or even i a few chapters i see it going on and on into a long series (With my help or without does not matter) it matters that there are so many People out there that when they find this story and it ends like this they will be sad and want it to go on but with a exra a hand (me) you can not disapoint all of those girls ( an mabye boys) out there

YOURE TEARING MY HEART APART

@KiaraMariex
a couple more chapters, love, but all good things come to an end ;)