I'll Be Your Naughty Girl - Comments, page 2

@LTStyles92
Yay thanks you xxx

I'm sticking around

I love it just please update

I love it just pleaI

It's very good. I am scared to death for her! But I can't wait to see how her and Louis get together.

Can't wait for the new update! This is a really good story! Louis and Michaela sitting in a tree......

@louis xxxx
I will try to
Im planning the next chapter tomorrow xxx

Really good plz start updateding reguarly. Love it so far

Omg Please update asap

Love it as always! ;) xoxo :* <3

Please updated ASAP pleas love this so much

Love this story! Wont ever unsubscribe till its over! Love it!!! Take your time my doll!

@Boobear and Nialler's Bitch

No worries :)

@louis xxxx
Thank you xxx

@Tera Levigne
Thank you xxx

Love this story love to see wat will happen I won't unsubscribe coz love the story that much xxxxx

I am excited that they met, it is a very good story and I like it a lot.
some constructive criticism: try and make the conversations have more depth to them, note facial expressions, or tones of voice, and try to bring out some more discription. Other than that, GREAT JOB!

@Boobear and Nialler's Bitch
Seriously intriguing!!

@LouisLady
Glad you liked the update
And I'm happy that your thinking about how my story is going to go xxx

I loved it. I was terrified they're going to get caught at the end of the chapter. I think Louis is going to save her from this hell but I jus don't know how yet.