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Sin City - Comments, page 2
Really good!! And yeah, my ex sits behind me in two of my classes... But anyways, I like how Lisa has her own nickname for Amelia, but I sort of wish that instead of it being Babydoll, that It was Bambi, like in the tv show scrubs because she is really innocent, and confused. Also it sorta sounds like something you might hear around there if you get my jist:)
I love how you don't put your characters in a relationship after only the second chapter & you actually have story line! I really like this story'! It's really good
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So good! Please update!!! By the way, loved the spanish;p
(my brother is in Spanish 4, so yeah, ik quite a bit, haha)
Love it!! And along with someone else that said it can you do Harry's P.O.V next please!! And yeah and does diamond meet her or no? Or like is she nice? Oh well I will have to wait and find out.. Anyways update soon please so good!
I love everything about it lovely!!!:)
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