Friends with Benefits - Comments, page 25

its an amazing story! its not boring at all! its so....i dnt even have words to describe it! itsa good story so keep writing!

I love this story!! :D

continue it is so not getting boring i read the whole thing yesterday and everytime i see you updated i have to read the next chapter you wrote. please continue. UPDATE!!!

Update please!:) <3

omg update!

DO NOT STOP WRITING!!!
oh and update please (:

DON'T STOP WRITING.

Nooooo dnt stop writing

That last line omg <3 I love this so much

don't stop writing! it's getting better again! well it was good all the time but ... ya know :D update soon please xx

Yesss I totally think Holly should return to One Direction as their make up artist!! Can't wait for your next update! :) xx

aahhhh I'm freaking loving thissss sttooorrrryyyy please please updattee !!

I love this story but there are way too many steamy scenes with JUST Harry....maybe she can become FWB with one of the other boys. Like maybe Liam and Danielle break up so he's upset and him and Holly become FWB too. Or maybe even Louis too......& Zayn. But I feel like Niall should stay true to Keira! This story is brilliant! -Julia .Xx

i love the story!! i just started reading aboit...lets just say hours ago and omg! i love this story! its amazing! you needa update a.s.a.p!!! and i wanna see yur face!!!!!!!!!!!
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omygod!!!!!!!! you need to update like, NOW!!!!!! this is really good!

I love! Please ipdat

I think holly should return to be one directions make-up artist (: just my opinion <----- lol the bold is really cool

anyways UPDATE!!!!! please

Update soon pleaseeeeee

YES!!!! YES!!! return as the makeup artist and get back together!!!

omg love that!!! have him finish his sentence and have her return as their make up artist. Don't finish it there i love it continue if you can. :)