There's Someone Always Watching - Comments, page 6

@GothikVampiress
It's real. THINGS JUST GOT REAL.

is this a dream or was it real? I'm so confused, my brain is wtfing

@DirectionerChelsea
@IN.MY.1D.DREAMS

You have NOOO idea... :P

Oh she liiikes him!!!

I swear Niall and Tessa will be the cutest couple EVER

@Liam's Girl
@Ms. Jerry

;)

Haha what if he's jacking off in there. Haha!

Plz update

Hahaha

@Liam's Girl

He's masturbating. I just know it

I love thiiiiis.xx

OMG IS NIALL N TESSA GOING TO GET TOGETHER

Oooooh! Niall has a cruuuuush!

@The Renegade
Oh thanks! Sometimes I get bored and forget what in writing about, thank you for telling me!

Errrg! That maid! I hope she gets staked.

The fourth paragraph "It was the day after Harry..." slips from first person into third person a couple of times. Not sure if that's something you want to fix up or not, just thought I'd mention it. Otherwise, I'm loving your regular updates - keep up the good work on the book :D

@Forever_Young_12345
I'm glad!

@IN.MY.1D.DREAMS
;)

Omg!! Harry and Liam ;).

OMG...I'm in LOVE with this story.....

Pretty goood.