There's No Such Thing As Too Young - Comments, page 2

@illianaaa
We could be besties!
Your a pretty girl!
You should use your face in your next story instead of someone else's.

@Lilyrabbit
It's no problem.

1. illianna Fuentes
2. Sunny San Diego California
3. 16 years of age
4. Aldo and for one year
5. Midfield
6. SOCCER IS LIFE!!!! I met Aldo playing soccer.
7. Once you get a first sentence, the rest comes easy
8. Modern rock, post hardcore, metal rock, screamo, Spanish
9. Columbiana:)
10. Louis's fine ass. He's sexy in a soccer uniform <3

I have some questions and I would like some answers.

1. What is your name?
2. Where do you live?
3. How old are you?
4. What is your boyfriends name and how long have you guys been dating?
5. What position do you play in soccer?
6. How much do you love soccer?
7. How do you get such good writing skills?
8. What other kind of music do you listen to?
9. What is your decent?
10. Who is you favorite 1D member?

I'm so sorry. I just admire you so much. And I'm really nosey.

@Lets_be_random_together :P
Aww. Thank you! And it's the inspiration from people like you that give me inspiration to write. Good luck with with your story getting published. You have to be a better writer than me. And I guess the only things I'm good at is writing, playing soccer, & being a loyal girlfriend.

@illianaaa
Yes! Please make more stories! Your good at it.

I love your stories. You are the one that actually got me to write the stories I do today. One of the ones I wrote my moms friend sent to a publisher and I have a possibility of it getting published, and it's all thanks to you! You are an amazing writer, I hope you know, I love the way you express the different characters!!!! Have a wonderful time writing, I have been telling all my friends and even people on here that I don't know!

You are inspirational!!!!

@rosegold

Thats every girls dream. But we just have to imagine it instead of living it.

I'm so happy for them. I wish I could meet a guy that is sweet and caring as Zayn.

@Lilyrabbit

There's too much that goes on inside my head. But yes! I will make a new story after this one if you really want it.

@illianaaa
I understand. And your welcome. I hope you come out with a new story after this one that should be about your life. Make it about soccer if you love soccer.
But now I really want to know you. I want to know what goes on in your head.

@Lilyrabbit

You don't sound like a creeper at all. Thank you for admiring my stories. It's people like you who leave inspiring feedback that make me continue on my writing. I'm glad that you like my stories and thank you for your compliments. They mean a lot!

And you want to get to know me? There isn't much to say about me. To sum it up, I'm just a Columbian kid who loves soccer and am in love with the game. I'm just a girl with a dream.

And you really don't want to know what goes on inside my head. If I were to write or say what I think about, I would probably be put in a hospital.

But thank you for reading my stories. I love it when I receive helpful feedback. It gets in my head and that is what I like. I like the readers to get in my head, but not too far because you might get lost, but it gives me new ideas.

Sorry for this long paragraph. This is just the first time I got feedback like this so I didn't really know how to respond. But thank you again. I love you!

I like how you can make sad scenes and then just create the next chapter with both of them finding happiness. You are an amazing writer and you have loads of talent.

I want to get to know you. I want to know what goes on in your head. All of the stories you have written are incredible. This story, Second Chances, and I Can Change Your Life are the best stories I have ever read!

You should tell everyone on here about yourself. Don't hide! You are extremely talented.

P.S. sorry for kind of sounding like a creep. I just admire your writing skills.

@illianaaa
Yeah sounds like super idea!! Write your heart out girl! Cuz you have talent-!!!

@illianaaa
Totally. I understand :)

@rosegold

@Brown_Eyed_Beauty

Opps! I meant Drella instead of Zella!

@rosegold

Sorry. I'm not going to make a therapist scene because I want Zayn to help Zella. I want to put it as part if strengthing their relationship if you know what I mean.

I was thinking of what you said and thought that this would probably make the story better.


@Brown_Eyed_Beauty

Hope you like my choice.

I am in sooooooo much love with this story!!!! Please update!!!!!!!!

Whoa sounds great!!! Make a therapist scene!!! Please update.

Drella needs to see a theapist.

I really hope that Zayn can help Drella with her eating disorder. They are really cute together.