One Chance *On Hold* - Comments

@LouisLady



@Boobear and Nialler's Bitch
I agree with both of you its just to good to come to an end soooooo fast. PLZ keep going.

@LouisLady
I agree this story is to good to come to a end so quickly xxx

I love this story and checking everyday for an update. I'd rather wait for your writer's block to clear and continue on. Just love this story.

please try, sorry if I sound demanding.

It was perfect.

That was soo cute they should so be a couple..... :)

Aww so sweet xxx I love it xxx

Great chapter, I'm loving this story xxx

UPDATE PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think u hold update

They should so have a heated make out session in te sea but gets ruined by one of the boys coming in the water to tease then xxxx love the chapter xxx

I think they are gonna snog because he has a point to prove lol

Is there a update tonight xxx

@LouisLady

@Louis and Niall's Bitch

Thank you so much!

I agree with Louis and Niall's bitch!!

OMG this chapter us amazing, this story is amazing, your amazing, Lou and Aria are amazing, I'm addicted to this story can't wait for the next update xxxx

Again, I just love these two.

This story is so good, it needs more votes xxx

Per-fect xxxx

@Louis and Niall's Bitch
True. :)