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@gsp_2000
Don't worry I will update now... I FREAKING LOVE BANANA BREAD!!! Good idea by the way I'll try and use it (I will give you credit though :D)

Idk what to think of Niall looking serious, it isn't bad though. I love bannan bread and i think hanna and kathy fought over chad or something like that. PLZZZZZ UPDATE this story is so good!!!! :)

@Lwhaley
Thank you. I will take into consideration all your ideas, they are really great! I will try and make some more drama between Niall and Kathy. I will change it so Kathy doesn't seem as weak. I hope you have a great new year! :)
thanks for everything! :) xxx

I like it so far. It's good but I can kind of tell you are waiting for feedback before you decide where the story is going.
First thing I am going to say is, do whatever you want with it. I mean, it is your story.
Second thing, Niall and Kathy should definitely get together soon but I think there should be drama. Once they get together they should go on a date and then Chad ruins it or something. Chad shouldn't completely ruin it, just interrupt it for a little bit, maybe make Kathy fall for him a little bit again. But that is just my opinion and if you completely hate it, that is fine.
Third thing, Hannah. I am not sure if you already had plans for her or not but I'm just going to tell you what I think about her, Kay? Kay. So, her history first. Maybe Hannah was only a tag along in their group because of Jen. Like, the only reason she hung out with the group and was accepted is because Jen was her sister. Once Jen left, Kathy and Louise didn't know how to act around Hannah without Jen there, so they just kind of stopped hanging out with Hannah because it was awkward. This made Hannah upset and maybe she felt unwanted, so she found a new group of friends, who hated Kathy and Louise, and then, because she was hanging with this crowd, they just started bullying Kathy and Louise. But don't make the bullying calling them fat or anything, because I don't want Kathy to be a weak character(physically is what I am talking about in this instance but she shouldn't be weak in any way) with an eating disorder.
Anyways, I hope this feedback is helpful and I also hope you have a wonderful New Years'!

Hope you all enjoy the new update <3 xxxxxx

@Hailey Colleen
Don't worry I'm working on it now :)

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@Lwhaley
Awww thx! I was worried people weren't enjoying it so I didn't want to update :( but I will update soon! :)

I really like this story. I usually wait for a story to have like 15 or 20 chapters before I subscribe but I'm gonna subscribe like, right now(Right now there are only 7 chapters :) )

@Frogalaxy
okie dokie

@Hailey Colleen
That's great! I will update soon

@Frogalaxy
i am

@Hailey Colleen
Haha. I've only just finished my shopping today! Hope your enjoying the story

christmas eve is tomorrow i'm freaking out, "Santa" (my parents) are christmas shopping right now. I'm not supposed to know

@Frogalaxy
okie dokie

@Hailey Colleen
Yes they will but there will be a certain way of finding out

will they actually tell our little leprechaun why she was crying.

@Frogalaxy
Thanx and okay

@Hailey Colleen
Yes chad was. And your welcome. I loved reading your book by the way