Love In The City - Comments, page 11

WTF WHY NO STOP LIKE NOW NO STOP they cant brake up yo

@victoria harris
Foreall.. Life sucks-,-

@annaggg123
No problem

Nooooo!!

Love this book so much but I am a little confused about how they broke up. Could you do a flashback?

I feel bad for them

I can't wait to read Harry's POV! Oh my gosh. I wonder what DID go wrong, I bet it was stinkin management

@Briaannaa
Lol
Reality can be a bitch

I'm excited for Harry's POV :) Your an amazing writer lol I'm jealous!

Awe.. This is how I feel when I think of my unexisting boyfriend.. We were so perfect until reality hit me.

I'm so into this story that I really feel Diana's pain </3 And I can't wait next chapter for the Harry POV!!! I just hope he had a good reason :/

I just read your notes on chapter 17 and i so agree with you about the ratings. We're not professionals, you dont have to be so fucking critical. ITS A FANFICTION for crying out loud. I poster a differents kind of story other than Half a Heart and it was ranked an 8 and is now a 9.3 and no those arent horrible ratings but ive asked SO many times for people to tell me why and nobody has and its pisses me off. If youre gonna give me less than a 10 you better fucking tell me why. That way i can grow and make the story exactly what they want it to be. Its so stupid


and btw im in love with Little Black Dress and Love In The City. These are my favorite fanfics :3

How aren't they together. They are made for each other! They can't just drop it like that

They were like indestructible.

Poor Diana

Aw I have read this story from the start and to see them nit together is breaking my poor fragile heart :'( ♡

Oops meant great

Update when you get the time. Grew story not stop!

YES HARRY'S POV IS THE BEST. Cuz I need to know what he's thinking.

Ahhhhh this is so perfect can you please update one more time today we love your story so much and want more!!! Pleeeeeaaaasssseeee