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Rate: 8.7
I like your plot on how this girl is in this popular click but is not accepted, and 'only there because they pity her'. Since it's only 5 chapters the story hasn't even begin to grow, so i can't criticize on much! Your story all together (grammar, vocabulary) is okay! (: I like how you go into detail on some of her actions. And all in all it has a pretty good setup.
The only downfall is the super short chapters! :( I wish i could read more!
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3/11/14