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What Comes Around Goes Back Around - Comments, page 7
Nooo! This whole story was based off of Heidi and harry, how he bullied, she came back for revenge and than fell in love. Harry & Heidi should stay together, kill Louis off or like skylar styles said, bring Eleanor into the story. :) In the end, it's your story and you should do what you think is right! :)
Ok in my point of mind, I think that you've already switched shit up enough. Jamie and Liam, Christa and Zayn. Then we have Niall, Jules, Harry, and Louis. You can't make Heidi fall in-love with Louis because example a.) he has stalked her. example b.) she fell in-love with Harry first. example c.) he's the reason her parents are dead and Amanda is too. Now you can't kill Harry off or do anything to him because you strictly based this whole plot off of Heidi and Harry falling in-love. Now Niall is much more understandable because he is the one who saved her from being blown to bits, he's the one who is protecting her more than anybody. Now another reason Louis and Heidi can't be together, Louis would be getting what he wants. Why don't you add Eleanor into this story and make Louis fall for her????
Do you get where I'm going with this? Either Harry+Heidi or Niall+Heidi.
There is NO other option!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You should kill off Harry and then when he dies, Louis comforts her and then she falls in love with him. Then they team up and kill the others!!
Id piss my pants if Heidi fell in love with one of the other boys... idk why I find this funny but it be a hell of a plot twisr
I think it's a good plot twist for Hedi to fall in love with Louis but you if kill Harry THEN HELLA TO THE NO and of course my baby,Harry will get back together with Hedi in the end ;)
No please don't do that, I don't want to be mean but I don't want her to fall for Louis! Her and Harry have a 'history' and that's kinda cute in a weird way!
No please don't do that, I don't want to be mean but I don't want her to fall for Louis! Her and Harry have a 'history' and that's kinda cute in a weird way!
Zayn does a little mistake and realizes he has given wrong drug and Harry'll heal and Heidi and Harry could be together. SO DON'T DO THAT IDEA! It's a great idea but not for this story.
No hedi and Harry or Niall because everyone's against Niall but he's not the only one that back stabbed Jamie Zayn Liam and Christina all back stabbed by going to kill hedi
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NOOOOOOO! THAT BETTER NOT FUCKING HAPPEN Harry and Heidi need to be together yes she should team up with Louis and Niall and kill Zayn, Christa, Liam and Jamie Harry as I said BETTER NOT DIE. Why cant you just make Heidi and Harry be together and then make Louis, Niall, Jules, Heidi and Harry all be friends again like fucking serious the Idea of her falling for Louis and killing Hazza is the worst idea for this story there is no way in hell I can or will read anymore if Harry dies and Heidi falls for Louis that would ruin the story sorry to be a party pooper but it would the story is based on Harry and Heidi's love you can't just take that away and make her with Louis and kill Jamie, Christa, Liam, and Zayn like that then kill of Harry like no that would ruin the story and plot it's perfect now except Harry needs to get better so that he and Heidi can kill the rest of them (Liam, Jamie, Christa, Zayn) and then recreate the gang or something with Niall and Jules and maybe Louis IDK about him still yet like being with them but you can't just change it like that it would suck so bad I would cry and loose one of the good stories I read so PLEASE don't do that I like it now but like I said make Harry get better and be with Heidi because the story is based on them being together and getting revenge or killing Louis and the rest of them (Not Niall and Jules) Add Eleanor and make Louis with her and Heidi with Harry maybe Niall cause that would be fucking cute but don't do muthafuckinxd's idea I hate it. :( Take this into the consideration of your viewers PLEASE :) thanks.
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