The Devil In Disguise (Marcel/Harry Fanfic) - Comments, page 6

They are all vampires aren't they. I don't know about Liam though. And the lead singer is marcel. He's one too isn't he. Get some action into this girl!! I mean it's good information, but it needs some like action, idk. I still love the story!!!

@Awesome_girl_123
Almost, you almost got it ;) Its like that but with a lot more surprises along the way ;)

also i'm going to try and make Harry look as scary as possible so when Ruby gets a phone call at the grill It'll hopefully up the tension loads.

If you want to know how the scary phone call will start you can see the beginging of it on my front page :D

Well I thnk that that marcel/harry is like the big vampire leader dude thiny and like every one ealse knows it but sara/ruby also is lous a vampire? btw this is a reallly goood story :) :)

@Awesome_girl_123
I guess so but I don't mind, guess away :) (Or just private message me gets you think is going to happen) :D

If I made a guess of what is going to happen and I turned out to be right would I be considered a spoiler??

@Niallsprettyprincess
:)

@SNOW
Your killing me lol.

@Niallsprettyprincess

Hopefully she wont.... ;)

@SNOW
Hopefully she won't kill him........ right?

@Narrys Child

I will at somepoint today, I'm writing more now but I don't know how long I'll be but I'll defiantly update another chapter today :)

please update soon!!(:

@StylesGirl

Now that is the question isn't it? ;) (Evil laugh)

I'll write her reaction to Zayn soon and thank you so much for commenting :D

What, zayns a vampire. Not surprising, but will she kill him

@Niallsprettyprincess
Yep ;)

Zayns a vamp

@StylesGirl
I'll update soon :) And all will be reviled in time ;)

What's wrong with Zayn may be solved before Ruby finds out whether Marcel is a vampire or not :)

And at the grill she may just have a extremely suspicious phone call :)

I hope every chapter will be interesting and you get new questions to wonder about in almost every chapter but don't worry they all will be solved by the end of this story ;)

I kinda confused but I really like the story so far! When you update, you should update longer. Well its fine either way as long as you do. So whats up with zayn, im guessing it has something to do with vampies. Is marcel a vampire? I dont know.... Update!!

@sel is reckless

Thank you!! :D :D <3

@SNOW
gurl u brighten up MY day! :) xx