Untouchable Face {NEW- Larry Stylinson AU Fan Fiction} - Comments, page 11

Plz update ! I really love your story!

Plz update ! I really love your story!

@Blondechix
Yayyyyy! You made my day. I'm happy that you get Zemma. I guess I can't expect people to ship every couple :P haha but thank you so much. Xx I think Zemma is exciting too.

I've only just discovered this story, I'm a big fan of your Behind Closed Doors fic and thought I'd check this one out and i definitely haven't been disappointed, this is amazing! I've read read it all in a couple of hours and its unbelievably hot!!! I'm loving both Louis and Harry's relationship and also Emma and Zayn's which is something I wasn't expecting but its very exciting. However, Emma's lie about Harry, really not cool lol I really hope it doesn't come back to haunt them later. Can't wait for the next update! Soon please! X

@Harry's Only
Hehe either way, I hope you like the story <3

@onedirectioninthetardis

lmfao maybe ;

@Harry's Only
Maybe you'll feel differently later. Or not. Lol :)

@MoreThanThis
Thank you!!! I'm so glad you like it <3 I guess the ratings aren't that important when I have so many people telling me how much they love it. :)

Omg I love this story! You say you notice how this story doesn't get as good of ratings as your other story's but this is by far my favorite story as a fanfic!<3

Omg I love this story! You say you notice how this story doesn't get as good of ratings as your other story's but this is by far my favorite story as a fanfic!<3

@onedirectioninthetardis

nope, she a ho
:l

@Harry's Only
Lol. Maybe she's just a little misunderstood! ;)

Emma -.- you're a bimbo... Zayn that's your best friends' daughter! Damn :/ Emma's a slut sack

@Let Larry Love
Thank you darling <3

@onedirectioninthetardis
Well your writing is beautiful!:)

@Let Larry Love
Thanks so much <3 I'm so glad you love it!!
Yes, that's my aim. I want it to be a bit realistic :)

And the good thing about this story is it is t one of those that makes you want to rip your eyes out bc it's so damn sad. It's like a real life kind of thing and I like it.

Louis better say they are boyfriends.. Like forbidden lovers or something and this is a really great story I love it! It should have fantastic ratings.

@xonenight
Thanks :*

its good i like the story

@niallswoman__
It's all good :)
PM me and we can talk about it... I doubt that I'll even be able to contribute to a story but if you start one, I can totally give you tips and help with ideas! <3