Lala Land *BEING REDONE* - Comments, page 3

you didn't.... no, not her sister! D: omg this is evil if you really did what I think you did to her sister!
but it's a good twist in the story. but why her sister D:

@marie.eve07
Thank you(:

omg, painkiller was so funny xD Hope you like your new home :)

@Mylalaland
Yeaaaaaaah! Can't wait! :D

@marie.eve07
Haha I thought I'd make it interesting. The next chapter is gonna be interesting as well(:

damn yeah we love chapter 'Doctor Styles'! :D
Yeah! Harrington kissed!
continue writing, it is really a fun time reading your story :)

@marie.eve07
Thank you very much for your input, I needed that. And I'm not offended at all, I knew my writing still needed a little more work. It still does in some ways. I'm pretty reparative and I'm trying to fix that. Thank you again(:

it's okay if the dance was on three chapter. You put so much details and information! It's really important; some fic has not that much info and details, and we get lost easily.
I think putting the dance in three chapter could have been really long, but like I said, you put so much detail and precision about everything, I think that was good! We don't get lost and we understand more the story!
And yeah, your writing is definitely better! No offence hahaha xD I mean, you already had a beautiful writing, and now it's just more and more beautiful! :D
So congrats and uptade soon! :D

I think it's not Harry nor Taylor or holly. I think it's like Niall or something.

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Great pictures and opening summary... looking forward to more :)

Wow! so good!
Keep it up, it's really good!
Update as soon as you are ready! :)

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I don't have patience :/