Through The Dark - Comments

@WeddingGown
Thank you :)

Loved it

@loseyourself
Thank you :)

@hazzahstyles19
Oh okay. Honestly you're like one of my favorite writers so i hope u keep writing because you're very talented

@loseyourself
My Bully is on watt pad, I haven't had the account very long so Through The Dark isn't up just yet.

Just finished reading through the dark and o my god i loved it! The ending was perfect and just wonderful!! Great job! If i were u i would consider putting this on Wattpad

@NightShade Hawkins
Thank you :) Me and @onedindahouse work very hard on Beautiful Monster. and I was re-reading My Bully the other day and I noticed that Zayn was kinda just there, not doing anything very much. I guess I was just working so hard on all the new characters I added in and the whole Liam-Nichole-Harry triangle that I kinda slowly pushed him out.

@hazzahstyles19
I am all caught up with "Beautiful Monster". I really enjoy it, actually. I like the conflict {I cringed at the raping parts, of course}.
I loved how you portrayed Niall as a rough, somewhat brutal character. It was very refreshing. In literally all of the stories I have read {which is quite a lot}, Niall is always portrayed as this huge sweetheart. Don't get me wrong, I understand that in real life he probably fits the description of a teddy bear and such. Your take on him was unique and like I previously said; refreshing.
I also liked how Zayn has more of a role in this story. In many of the stories that I've read {including the "My Bully" saga}, Zayn has little to no involvement within the plot of the story. Once again; refreshing.
In short, I am anxiously waiting for the next update. I have not gotten the chance to read the other 2 stories you mentioned. But when I do, I will be sure to give you my honest and full report.

- Hawkins Xx

@NightShade Hawkins
Have you read my other stories??? I would like you to read How Sweet The Taste, Beautiful Monster and my new one Shattered Glass in case you haven't. You seem to be honest and I like that. Tell me what you think?

@NightShade Hawkins
Of course :)

@hazzahstyles19
No problem. (: Hey, would you be so kind as to please read my story? I have only a few chapters written so far. But it would mean a lot to me. Thank you.

- Hawkins Xx

@NightShade Hawkins
lol well it makes me happy that you enjoy my writing :)

@hazzahstyles19
I understand. However, I still enjoyed your story {obviously, otherwise I wouldn't have read "My Bully 2" and thus we wouldn't be having this conversation. (: }

- Hawkins Xx

@NightShade Hawkins
lol yeah I understand what you are saying about the nice switch but you know how some people are. Once something like that happens, their whole attitude changes not to mention Liam was going sweet on her and I didn't think any of the boys would want to get on his bad side. But, I completely agree with you. Looking back, there's a few things I could have changed to make it a little more interesting.

@hazzahstyles19
I thought it was good. I, personally, would've liked a bit more conflict between the boys and Nicole {not too much, of course. I wouldn't want her to have her life endangered and such}. I found it interesting that the second Nicole got pregnant, all of the boys turned from grizzley bears to puppy dogs {in short, they instantly became nicer, like someone flipped the "nice switch"}.

And no problem. I believe discussion in key within this community of ours. Plus, you seem nice and I like talking to nice people.

- Hawkins Xx

@NightShade Hawkins
So what did you think about it??? :D I love that you are actually having a conversation with me when I ask you a question lol it's nice.

@hazzahstyles19
Yes, yes I did. I was so glad that you made a great sequel to it!

- Hawkins Xx

@NightShade Hawkins
lol I thought about it but I figured you guys could use your imaginations with that XD Oh, did you read the first story to this, My Bully??

Quick question; Why the FUCK {yes, I just cursed} did Nicole not go all Burlesque dancer on Harry's ass on the honeymoon?! I'm just saying, you could've done a whole chapter one that. I still love your story though.

- Hawkins Xx

@NightShade Hawkins
:D I'm glad you are enjoying my story!!!