The Aftershock - Comments

Update soon pleaseeeeeeeeee???????

Lulu is too cute! She's so adorable!

I really love this story. Please update soon!!!

Amazing.

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Thanks for letting is know! Just update when you can!!

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Thanks:) I'm glad you like it <3

@Macy loves harreh

OMG this is great

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Oh gosh please update

Oh shit!

STILL WAITING.....

I'm waiting for an update.......

Girl, don't listen to other people! Yours is one of my favorites. You should definitely keep writing!

NO I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY I DIDN'T KNOW I WASN'T SUBSCRIBED TO IT UNTIL I CHECKED MY SUBSCRIPTIONS IF YOU DELETE THIS STORY I WILL KILL YOU, YOUR MOTHER, YOUR FATHER, AND YOUR WHOLE FAMILY. I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND MURDER YOU WITH A BUTTER KNIFE AND CUT YOUR HANDS OFF AND DIG YOUR GRAVE WITH THEM AND DROWN YOU IN YOUR OWN TEARS I SWEAR 2 GOD I WILL IF YOU DELETE THIS STORY IT IS AMAZING BUT IT'S JUST NOT SOME PEOPLE'S CUP OF TEA
PUT MORE DRAMA IN IT GURRLL
LIKE I HAVE IDEAS I WILL MESSAGE THEM TO YOU

Hi! Now I'm being completely honest here. (If I sound rude, I'm sorry) I absolutely loved 'New Girl'! It was a good story. But I think, that the way the first book ended was kind of boring. This seems to happen in every book: Boy meets girl, they like each other, they get together, they fight, then they're OK, and later on, they break up for some time, and get back together. I'm not done yet...Then they break up because one cheated, and BAM! The sequel is out! I liked it, I still do! I just think, you should have used a better way to continue on. Obviously, Joey and Harry are going to get back together, and do whateer the hell it is they do. This makes readers seem too bored, or let them predict exactly what's going to happen.. So if you were to delete this story, at least fix up the last parts of 'New Girl'.

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I love your story and I'm pretty sure everyone is reading your story unlike mine when no one is reading!

YOUR NOT A TERRIBLE WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your amazing!!! And the reason this one is less popular is because is been up for a far smaller period of time!!! Please never think that people don't read this.