Late - Comments, page 2

This is literally the best gan fiction I've ever read! Couldyou possibly read mine?
The Chemical

@Thyme
ok thx

@Thyme
ok thx

Dear Miss Beebee321,
I love this story. I'm not done with it yet but I have a problem getting past the chapter that I'm on.
Chapter 11.
When the the doctor is taking Harry's temperature, she says he's at 107 degrees, right? Well, our brains cannot withstand temps. over 105 degrees. 105 and up, your brain is fried. You would be dead at 106. If you aren't, you're a veggie.
I'm not joking.
You can't talk or breathe. And if you are, they must be using a machine to make you.
You said you wanted feedback, and this is my only problem so far. I hope there's no more. I don't intend to sound like I'm hating or whatever, the story is great, but the temperature!! Grr! I don't know why I am stuck on it!
Anyway, if/when I post somethin up here, feel free to say something.
Yours truthfully,
Thyme

If yall dot mind telling me what i could be better, that would be great! thanks.

omg who is excited for the walking dead?!

@Jenny Styles
Ok, I will try

do a seiries it cant end!

@Beebee321
That's okay :)

@Lilywilliams
Oh okay, thanks. It won't be up for a wile though

If you want to I would for sure read a sequel or something like that! :)

Hey y'all, if you want to see the baby pics the link is in the last chapter!!!!!

@Abc123_i_love_1D
Thx

Oh my gosh, the baby is so adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111!!!!1!!1!1!

@onedirection_is_fvckin'_sexy
thank you, im working on it!

Omg I love this story! You NEED to keep updating!!!!!!!!!!

@Mrs. Storplikson
thank you so much!

This is amayzayn!!

listen up people, a part in the story will have a big secret that involves Niall!...