Author's Note - Comments, page 16

Hi could you please review my fanfic, i just started it and its called first time
thankyou xx

Hi could you please review my fanfic, i just started it and its called first time
thankyou xx

Hello! Would you mind reading mine? Here is the link http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/10669/Dare-To-Love/

Can you review my story "Best Day of Our Lives!!"
please and thanks.

@Fivesexof1D
no problem!

I just read my review! .x Thanks! .x :)

Could you check out 'I'm Done Hiding' ? please and thank you! <3 c:

can you review my funny imagines please?
I just want to know if they are funny or not! :P

awe thanks love appreciate the fact that you've subscribed :) Hope you enjoy it and thanks for the review! xx

Little Black Dress and Cafe Girl? :)

could you please read my story is called Looking forward

@PickNandos
yayyy! thanks so much!

@Irish Gal

No problem! I don't usually like to read stories that have Niall fall in love... Id rather write that, but yours I actually enjoy a lot, and my friends think I have epilepsy or something, cuz I kept on spazzing at your amazing writing

@PickNandos
oh sweet! thanks!

@Irish Gal

Oh, phsycic moment... I've been reading your stories since I asked you to review mine actually, theyre really very good!!!

@PickNandos
haha no problem! And it would be really cool if you could look at mine.....not as good, but hopefully they're interesting enough to read!

Oh. My. Freaking. Gosh. You're serious? That's the first good review I've had with my story!!! OMG, I flipping love you right now! But like, sisterly, Directioner love! OMG!

Hey! Could you please give your opinion on my story? It's only 2 chapters (I only started 2 days ago), but I need to know if I should change my way of writing... :s
My story's called 'True love?'...
xoxo

could you review my story "The Wanted Girl"? Thanks love xx