Author's Note - Comments, page 13

We made it up lol

Thanks :)

Either or. Whichever one you prefer.

@Darcie.Niall.Horan
do you want a comment or review?

Can you comment on my first fanfic once in a lifetime for me? I would really like your feedback! Thank you.

Can you review Embarcadero for me?

No prob :) And thanks for the criticism. The plot is kinda like... with all the drama, would the boys' relationships be able to survive? It gets better, later on in the story. And will do :)

I subscribed already:)

Please may you do mine thank you very much! Million Pound Girlfriend

Can you review directioner games and past and present? :)

Can you read the Bakery shop for me thanks

Can you read Embarcadero for me, also? Thanks :)

@Irish Gal
Thank you I will take all of this into consideration :)

Thankyou! Xxxxx

@Irish Gal
Lol you did. Sorry :P and okay, thank you <3

@Kay_Baby
I think I already did Wolf....chapter 54 I believe. I have two stories in front of you and then I can do yours!

@Emerald Girl
Awesome! I'm glad I could help!

Hey thanks for the advice! Plus I do not think you were being mean you were being honest and I appreciate that. Also I plan on adding a few plot twists and honestly when I first started writing this story I wasn't thinking about where the story was going until like the fifth chapter so I get what you are saying about it not being to interesting at the beginning. I'll do the paragraphing.

@MaliksFutureWife
just finished :)

Can you please reviw my story "The Moon's True Light" ??