Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments - Comments, page 8

Please review my story a change at heart thanks!!

"I had an ORGANISM."
JESUS CHRUST I LOST IT THERE
THIS WHOLE THING IS ABSOLUTELY ACE
PLEASE NEVER STOP MAKING FUN OF THESE TYPICAL MOMENTS

Hey, it be great if you could review my story, I looks through all yours chapters and tried to follow what you said not to do, okay thanks.

http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/27692/Larger-than-us/

can you review my stories http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/4530/The-Future-And-Now-My-Life-Now-And-In-The-Future-Sophies-View/ and http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/4654/What-happens-When-I-Meet-Him/

You're like the Gordon Ramsay of Fan-fictions.

Can you review my story please? :D It's called "The Love" after reading this I find that I do what a lot of other people do so I'm expecting like a 6 -( o.o )-

http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/31095/The-Love/

Main character's best friend is black so yay no racism! :D (I did that cause my best friend in real wanted to be in it and her favorite 1D member is Harry) ;3

I told you to review mine a long time ago u never did :(

Can you please review my story "The Moon's True Light" ???

Can you review my stories it would mean the world to me if you did thanks

@UniqueMOFO
Thanks, can't wait for it xxx

@Louis and Niall's Bitch

No problem!

@UniqueMOFO
Thank you so much xxxx ;-)

@Louis and Niall's Bitch

Sure :)

Can you review my story please it's called 'You only find love once' but it would mean a lot if you could review it please xxx

Please can my story be put on the waiting list? :)

I used to co author this and heartbreaker but I got rid of them because I thought I didn't want to do it but I kinda really wanna do it again, can that happen possibly happen? :)

@SNOW

Thanks :)

@UniqueMOFO
Thats okay, sorry for the rant again, I can be a sometimes quite defensive so sorry about that, see I'm socially awkward to....and thank you for not hating me :)

sorry its just I have received hate before once when I tried to defend one of my first stores I've ever wrote and completed so I was quite proud of it then the reviewer didn't really like the story then I got very defensive (It was one of my first ever fanfics after all) then she said some nasty things when I told her I didn't agree with her... and...yeah, you get the idea...

So...yeah, thank you for not hating and understanding, I may not like your review you did on my stories but I still like your other reviews and I'm defiantly stil staying subscribed to you.. :)

@SNOW

I don't hate you!

It's better to be honest then to stay quiet!

I wasn't really mocking your story, I just thought you might've seemed a little sad after review so I decided to put that there to make you laugh a bit...?

Lol, sorry, I am socially awkward :/

I keep on forgetting to tell people this, I'm dyslexic so I've always had trouble with my spelling and grammer, sorry I should have warned you about that but I did feel I tried really hard on it and the stupid thing is, my computer won't let me go back and change anything, it freezes up everything I try and go back into my chapters.

Also everything I put in there, I don't understand how it would seem boring? (including the plot twists, like the fact Marcel is really Harry, Louis is a werewolf, Ruby's dad is a vampire hunter but hasn't told her. Ruby's done something really terrible in her past, killing someone Harry really cares about and doing something else that has angered most of the vampire species) Also Harry was going to get feelings for Ruby but I'm defiantly not going to rush into anything like quite a few stories do....

So out of all of that you comment on is "my grammer is off" (I already know that but that was my fault I should have told you before that my spelling and grammar can be pretty crap)

(It has thoughts and speaking mixed together) What do you mean thoughts and speaking mixed together? I don't get it?

Do you mean the thoughts and speaking is on the same sentence?

(Your chapters are short) Huh? Last Time I checked each chapter a few are yes short but most took me an hour each to write and they are defiantly not short...

Though I guess this depends on your opinion of short...

And finally about the growling, after everything I put into my story you comment on how many growls I put in my story and that's one of the reasons you don't like it? Because I had to many growls in it? I have vampires in my story, they have a tendency to growl a lot, being monsters and all.

I'm so sorry for this rant I really am, truthfully I wouldn't have said any of this if it wasn't for your small comment at the end (Welcome to animal planet everyone)

That really hurt, it was like after all the hours and hard work I put into this story you were completely mocking it.

I get it if its not your cup of tea, if you would want to to correct some things of the story, if you don't really like it? But mocking it like that at the end? Because I had to many growls in it? You make it sound like on every chapter it would go something like this:

Ruby growled "Get away from me!"

He growled back "No chance"

He grabbed her leg and she growled at him "I told you to get of me you dumb ass"

He growled "And I said no"

She growled back "I'll kill you if you don't"

He growled "You can try"

Which it defiantly doesn't! Look I'm so sorry about this but I don't know why, I just feel like I should defend my story....

I could take if you hated my story, if you didn't like it, if you thought my plot was crap or my grammar, that my chapters were boring and short even if I wouldn't agree with it I could take it but whatever you do please please don't mock my story.

so Sorry again, I now feel like I should go on my knees and beg for forgiveness for my rant, I would if you wanted me to, please don't hate me for what I've said? Please?