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Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments - Comments, page 27
Honestly, I think this is STUPID.
It is just so wrong in so many diff ways I CANNOT explain!
it would have been BETTER to have this taken DOWN!
You seem so FUCKING stupid!
I feel like throwing you off a cliff!
ALOT of other people probably agree with me.
It's not like you are even that fucking important.
Now go die somewhere you piece of shit... -_-
It is just so wrong in so many diff ways I CANNOT explain!
it would have been BETTER to have this taken DOWN!
You seem so FUCKING stupid!
I feel like throwing you off a cliff!
ALOT of other people probably agree with me.
It's not like you are even that fucking important.
Now go die somewhere you piece of shit... -_-
Lol I would ask for a review on my story Good Meets Bad and the sequel Bad Meets Evil , but I'm scared lol . And here's another thing that annoys me that 98% of the fanfics on here have . Or should I say , DONT have . Commas or periods . For example: I got up this morning and did my hair I took a shower and then went downstairs and said good morning to my mom she said good morning back and i left to school . When i got to school I saw the most beautiful boy ever he had silky brown curls and his green eyes were just mesmerizing I think I'm in love .
Me: I wonder what your English grade looks like ...
Me: I wonder what your English grade looks like ...
Btw, I'm kind of hesitant about this, but, can you rate my story? An Alternate Universe?
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/24682/Love-in-London/
Please give it a chance?
Please give it a chance?
This is mine http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/10669/Dare-To-Love/ Please give it a chance?
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! Don't delete it just because these fuckers are mad that they don't belong writing fanfiction. Number one rule: if you can't tell the difference between there, they're, and their; you shouldn't be writing fanfics. Case closed.
I agree with ALL of this. I can't stand half of the fanfic rooms on here, though mine isn't perfect either. I did use the living in the same house thing, but it's necissary to the plot.
@UniqueMOFO_11
K so I just read over one of my stories , and I realized that I use the Starbucks thing , but only because the main girl works there . I use the Harry with dark eyes but only because they're filled with lust . And I use the "his lips crashed against mine" , but don't you think "he kissed me" would be a bit boring ? Sorry lol
K so I just read over one of my stories , and I realized that I use the Starbucks thing , but only because the main girl works there . I use the Harry with dark eyes but only because they're filled with lust . And I use the "his lips crashed against mine" , but don't you think "he kissed me" would be a bit boring ? Sorry lol
Dude , in all your chapters , you described 98% of all the stories on here . Like I wanna find a good fanfic to read , and most of these on here have bad grammar and puncutation which I CANT STAND or is too rushed or too boring or too mainstream . Ugh ! Bless you , child . Bless you .
11/22/13