Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments - Comments, page 24

Yay about being on the list!! You obviously have A TON of people to do but when your down with those could you check out my other story "Pressure"? Thanks!! :)

This is something that I think is actually really quite horrible: that whenever someone (fictional or not) are trying to make someone feel better, they say that they are beautiful. Because you know what? Being beautiful isn't the thing that people should care about the most. I mean, who gives to fucks about the color of their hair, or the angle of their cheekbones, or the shape of their body. I for one, would much rather someone tell me that I am a good person, or that I have a good soul, or that I care about others. Because in the end, you could be the most beautiful person in the world, but that would never get you anywhere in life.

Yasss... I'm on the list...

I love it so much, this is actually a really good guide to right fanfic, like the don'ts of writing fanfics. People these days sometimes just really don't have much creativity.

Or the names are Cassie or some jizz, or chocolate orbs why not maltezers. Actually I'm going to use that.

In some of the fanfics it's like where the fuck are these kids parents like its just a coincidence that their parents are out of town, just when they need them to be.

.... All alone

Omfg she's the earth!! She has mountains on her chest! Where da faq do u live girl?!

DON'T DO IT!!!! DO GO N TOUR HARRY WILL RAP YOU!! lol

Read the whole thing. A lot of talk about metaphors... but wtf. Good writing and complaints! A thing to add is about the Titles. They're either really long or overused. Ex 1: I met liam in a mall and married him Ex 2: Diana, kryptonite, carrot lover

@UniqueMOFO_11

@QuinnIrons

Thanks!
I did in my first fan-fic too. It took ALOT and by a lot, I mean ALOT of improving :P

I can't tell you how much I laughed reading these. Believe it or not I've made some these mistakes myself in my first fan fiction. Keep it up this is really funny.

@katy7629

I will update soon!
Glad it makes your day! :)

Ahhaahaha that NC-17 sh*ts true.... looool I love this! Please update soon! These make my day!

The first chapter is so true. Mines gramaticly correct! If you want to review "Something Great" by me.

THANK GOD YOUR ALIVE!!!!!!!!! I was staring to get worried there!!! But please do let us know when you die so that we won't be surprised ;)

Hi could you please review my fanfic i just started it and its called first time thankyou xx

about your hate, HATERS GONNA HATE! they are just jelly cuz you have a good thing going here. Also good job on chap 55. had a laugh attack. and im so sorry about wat happened to you. my parents aren't together but they don't fight. well thank you please update soon! Bye -mimi ^.^

@Dots

Thank you!
Even though I don't know you,
Love you too! :D