Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments - Comments, page 20

Haha my mom does that to me all the time I just glare at her thinking the whole time 'when will you stop?' Lol

@UniqueMOFO

Haha! My dad Is awesome witch technology. My grandpa too. He tries to get every new phone that comes out and has an iPod, an iPad, about three iPhones and a laptop lol

@Kay_Baby

My dad doesn't even know how to work an iPod 0.o

Yes. I do. Unfortunately. My mom loves that song. -_- It's hilarious though that my dad has the entire Take Me Home album on his iPod.

@Under_Your_Spell

Sure, I'll read it! :)

Hey, I was just curious as to if you could read my story and maybe give it a review? It's only one chapter so if it takes you awhile to get to it, whatever. I've never really written and 1D fanfiction and I could really use the help. I completely agree with all of your little ranty things, too.

@UniqueMOFO
No prob

@Kay_Baby

Thanks! :)

I looked at it! I think I commented and Subscribed

@CoookieKissses

Sure :)

Litearlly crying after I read all of this!!!! :'D

HELL YEAH!!!… Sorreh just love this

Lol! Congrats! Your story really blew up lol not literally of course

can you do my stories Blissfulness and Habit?

@Greatday
Just stop it and take it down. Your making yourself look really stupid. And learn some grammar and get better on your spelling. My two year old niece can spell better than you. She also has better grammar. So stop copying UniqueMOFO cause you look like a fool. Don't copy people then call them a bitch. And another thing. If you copy people it means that your obviously not smart enough to do your own work.

@Kay_Baby

Haha! Ikr

@Greatday there's no point in lying. We all know you copied. No ifs, ands, or buts about it. Just be a decent human being and take it down. I already flipped shit once this week. I have no problem doing it again. You're one of those people who make us mentally face palm. At least if you're gonna copy, do it right. AKA, don't do it word for word. And if you're gonna lie, at least spell correctly. Majority of us are hardcore critics and our number one dislike is bad grammar and spelling mistakes. There's no way we can take you seriously.


@Poking_Harry's_Dimples Lmaao! I love your comment! Haha, maybe the dog's leash ain't tight enough because she's getting a little ahead of herself here.

Omg @Greatday just stop! Your making yourself look kinda stupid. Don't copy stories than call people a bitch!

@NiallsNandos

Lol :)) google search ? Jk!


@Poking_Harry's_Dimples

Omggg lmaoo , you went totally off. Hahaha "I bet you would see a fatass female dog staring right at you" lmao that cracked me up the most!!! you are truly a hilarious girl.



@Orangeaiya

Lol ;)



@uniquemofo

Btw: I love this story/review thing, it's hilarious and the gigs omg u make my day! I love how your so forward and say everything you dislike, but still cautiously cause you don't wanna upset anyone.

My #1 dislike is: when one of the boys go out to dinner with a random famous girl she appears in like very fanfic as the bad guy!! Omg like Kendall Jenner.

#2) "he pinned me down to the wall" those kinda 'things' set me off eight away lol ;))

about the butterflies , people call that butterflies but they're really nerves . just thought i would let you know :)

@Greatday First of all, get your grammar problems sorted out; and you shouldn't be calling anyone a "bi***." I bet when you look in the mirror there's a fatass female dog staring straight back at you. I am a very nice person, but you just set me of. You did copy @UniqueMOFO 's story. You may have just changed some of the words, but on Chapter 34, Carrot Lover, you copied it WORD FOR WORD. You got a 1.0 rating on "your" story. Why? Because everyone knows you copied, and if you hadn't, what you wrote wouldve come out as sh*t. Face it, fatass female dog. You can only write dog sh*t, and I hope you know that........ You suck. Take a freaking pill. Something. Just stop pissing people off.