Café Girl - Comments, page 14

Already obsessed
What have you done to me?!

I hunk Harry's gonna fight someone in front of her

This story is the shit

Amazing. Just amazing

Please update soon:) i want to know whats happening next, please, please please!
& don't worry about homework, do it at lunch or something, it's easier so that'll give you atlease 3-4 hours to write:)
*feeling hopeful?*

DA BEST FUCKING STORY EVER

DA BEST FUCKING STORY story

i love this story so fucking much please update soon cause I freaking want to know whats going to happen next love you <3

OMG I love this so much. A strong girl with a strong mind. Haha go Alice:)
He might pin her against something or beat someone in front of her.

i love it!!!! it's actually perfect, a strong girl with a mind of her own! pls update!

I love this <3 hope you update soon ♥

A lot of swear words, but still pretty good! :))

it shouldn't be like the usual 'I want to get in her pants' and then suddenly ' I'm in love with her' it would be more intresting if he actually got to use her and then alice would find out and harry will be at first like ' i don't care i got what I wanted' and then he will realise he missed th love of his live !! xxx

Alice is gonna be like I'm not yours Harry so go eff off. And hatred and slowly but surely love!

Love this story!!!!!!

LOVING THIS STORY!!! I think Alice is going to be very mean at first, which will be included interesting to see what Harry does about that! I also think it is going to be hatred at first sight ( that us Alice towards Harry ). PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!

Plz update

You are AMAZING!!!!

Hatred at first sight, but then they'll slowly fall in love with each other!

(*_*) Im addicted to reading your fanfics and Alice's! ♥They are all perf♥ Keep updating pleaseeeee!

LOVE THIS STORY AND LITTLE BLACK DRESS UPDATE BOTH PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP