American Heart - Comments, page 2

@Chocolate is my life
lol thank you :)
ones called my broken angel and the others called the journal

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR LYRICJUNKY! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! Thank you for not deleting the story!
what is your other story called?

PLEASE DON'T DELETE IT!!! I LOVE THIS STORY WAY TOO MUCH FOR IT TO BE DELETED!!!

PLEASE DON'T DELETE IT :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( PLEASE...

NONONONONONONO! DON'T DELETE IT!

NOOOO! do not delete this story!! i keep reading it and if you get rid of it it would be the end of my little happy reading world. your story is great! you do not need to try make it better. just write what your happy with. If no one likes what you write then its their loss but not yours because your still writing this story for you. (people do like your story just saying becuase you have 8 susribers (i only have like 2 so its super exciting for me(yes i said me) that your story has 8!!))

Don't delete it!!!! 8(

@Chocolate is my life
ya i think im just going to go with charry since i cant seem to think of anything else :)

thank you for updating!!!
Harry and charlotte???
ummm.... harrlotte?? no thats weird.
charry??? i dont know.

@fascinated
I edite that part so if you want to reread that part to see if you can understand it better you can :)

@fascinated
no she wasnt
the mother just wanted to scare harry off and annoy charlotte and charlotte and dylan arent siblibg by blood but youll find out more about that as the story continues

So sorry if i confused you...

Wait, so the mother wasn't serious about Dylan marrying Charlotte??? Cause not only is that illegal, it also wouldn't get any money out of it.

Oh my!!! I have a feeling whatever it is, it won't be good! And please update again soon :D

Ahhhh. Update soon. Or I will die. You finished on a cliff hanger! (In my world that is not allowed!)

@Chocolate is my life
Lol! Something along thos lines! Though theres going to be a few plot twisters and if you want some hints to what it is just check out the bold words I just added in chapter 5

@Chocolate is my life
Lol! Something along thos lines! Though theres going to be a few plot twisters and if you want some hints to what it is just check out the bold words I just added in chapter 4

Yay!! You Updated again!!
Im betting her mum is going to:
A. Try to get her and Harry to fall in love and get married
or
B. be one of those very emarrassing mothers, as mothers can be

And your comments give me encouragement to write a chapter each day. In fact, I think im going to update again now :)

Thankyou for updating!! At least once a day read a new chapter from you and it makes my day that little bit better! Keep updating. I wanna know more :)

I think your story is amazing and just keep doing what you are doing! Update soon I hope! Could you please read my story "It's not easy to forgive" and leave a comment with ideas on how to keep writing it. I know where I wanna go with the story but I can't see to put it into words. Feedback would be amazing!

@LyricJunky101
Yay! You Updated. :) brilliant!