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Beautiful Monster - Comments, page 11
@hazzahstyles19
Ah, I see. Well like I said, I still enjoy the story {obviously, since I've subscribed and all}. Keep up the good work, ladies! (:
- Hawkins Xx
@NightShade Hawkins
There's nothing set in stone when it comes to this story. Me and @onedindahouse alternate chapters. I go off what she writes about and she does the same.
I personally believe that Harry's transition from being an ass to being in love with Amelia is a bit rushed. It's like he just dove straight in, which seems a bit odd given your construction of him. It's also as if someone pressed a button and Harry started helping out Amelia and the rest if the boys just kapuffed {yes. Ka-puffed} into a jumble of emotions and actions that may or may not be consistent with their past actions/emotions in the story. I find it a bit confusing and for lack of a better word, bleh. Not a boring bleh, but more like a where-the-fuck-is -this-story-going-because-I'm-confused-as-shit-and-my-brain-is-mush bleh {and yes, all of those dashes were necessary according to the laws of grammar}.
But it's your story and I am still a fan of it none the less. I'm anxious for what is going to happen next, like always.
- Hawkins Xx
@Ivanadirectioner
lol thanks, I try to make it a little funny and bossy when it's not way to serious in the moment.
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