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Goodbye to Yesterday *on hold - Comments
I understand it completely.(hopefully) okay so this is how I think it goes.
Chelsea and Louis used to date and they were in love but then smiley face dude(maybe like and ex-boyfriend if Chelsea or something)makes Louis break up with her and so as to not make her sad,Louis leaves in the middle of the night. It's been about a year and Lorena and Niall meet and start to fall in love. Then Chelsea and Louis are reunited and this smiley ace dude has just been watching and waiting for this to happen so he finds out everyone's secrets and threatens to tell everyone or kill someone so they do what he says.
Chelsea and Louis used to date and they were in love but then smiley face dude(maybe like and ex-boyfriend if Chelsea or something)makes Louis break up with her and so as to not make her sad,Louis leaves in the middle of the night. It's been about a year and Lorena and Niall meet and start to fall in love. Then Chelsea and Louis are reunited and this smiley ace dude has just been watching and waiting for this to happen so he finds out everyone's secrets and threatens to tell everyone or kill someone so they do what he says.
This is good but I'm getting very confused about the letters and who is who but other than that it's good!
It doesn't suck at all! You've got a good mystery going. The comment makes sense about Louis dying if he's with her, Louis pulling back from the kiss. Now, I'm just dying to learn how this all unfolds.
It doesn't suck at all! You've got a good mystery going. The comment makes sense about Louis dying if he's with her, Louis pulling back from the kiss. Now, I'm just dying to learn how this all unfolds.
No, it's fine. To me it made perfect sense, please continue. Its fine and perfect, so don't worry about it ♡
11/4/13