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1D 1SHOTS - Comments, page 5

@imustbeallie
Good, that's what I wanted it to do. I wanted it to make people feel something while they read it. That's why I write these kind of one shots, I like making readers feel emotions and not feels, that's why I don't do a lot of smut.

Zaynlove Zaynlove
12/26/13

@Niall's_Princess
Yep no problem! :)

Zaynlove Zaynlove
12/26/13

@Zaynlove

Yah :) Thanks

Niall's_Princess Niall's_Princess
12/26/13

that Oneshot made me cry :'(

imustbeallie imustbeallie
12/26/13

@Niall's_Princess
well the regular one shots are just stories that I make up and you can put whatever you want in it and make it your own but in a Song Shot I copy all of the lyrics to a song onto a word document and write a story around the lyrics. With the Song Shot I just write with the mood of the song. I can't write a happy story when the song is sad. get it? With a one shot I pick a song for a story for a Song Shot, I write a story for a song. See the difference?

Zaynlove Zaynlove
12/26/13

@Zaynlove

Thank you
<3 What's the difference between what you've been doing and a song shot?

Niall's_Princess Niall's_Princess
12/26/13

@The Dreaming Angel
Of cousre! I love giving help!

Zaynlove Zaynlove
12/26/13

@Zaynlove
Great , thanks a billion , so can I trust you for help whenever I'm stock ? Amazayn!

@The Dreaming Angel
well what I like to do is write a prologue first. It lets the readers get a feel of the story and what is to come, then I leave them with a HUGE cliffhanger. I have an example of this in my story "The Fire in His Eyes" go read the prologue for that story and it will show you what I mean. When I write prologues I usually write the climax of the story and then don't tell people the outcome and that gets them hooked. So go read that and you can ask me more when your done, k? cool :)

Zaynlove Zaynlove
12/26/13

@Zaynlove
What should I do to get people to read my story and keep reading it? Or in another words is there a golden rule or a personal experience you can give me?... I mean any kind of help would do right now.

@The Dreaming Angel
yes of course. what kind of tips would you like? What do you need help with?

Zaynlove Zaynlove
12/26/13

I've only written one chapter and I don't know whether to post it now or write another chapter too, I don't know if it's good enough .... I just need your advise... And some tips about writing... Anything:)

@The Dreaming Angel
ya go ahead.

Zaynlove Zaynlove
12/26/13

@Zaynlove
I definitely agree, the point of writing is to give the feeling... I hope I'll be as successful as you are in my own fan fiction... I'm still working on it... Can I ask you something ?

@Niall's_Princess
Ok great you will be my first song shot yay. I have a long list of people to write for so I will message you when yours is written.

Zaynlove Zaynlove
12/26/13

@The Dreaming Angel
Thank so much. That's the reason I write, to make people feel something and to know that I was able to achieve that, is amazing. Thank you so so much. :)

Zaynlove Zaynlove
12/26/13

Song shot please, my name Is Cora, Niall. And can the song be Half a Heart? Either it's a break up or one of us dies....?? You are an amazing writer.

Niall's_Princess Niall's_Princess
12/26/13

Oh my dear god! The last chapter was really really sad, you truly know how to show the pain , I can say I felt it!!!!!! I was scared to read the rest as my hands went numb.... You are so good at what you're doing...

@Zaynlove
OK! Thanks!

Niall Is Awesome Niall Is Awesome
12/23/13

@Louis is awesomeness
ok thanks I'll try to get to it a soon as possible. :)

Zaynlove Zaynlove
12/23/13