The Cafe Girl - Comments, page 4

@Yolo directioner

Hey! What's wrong with being fat, though? To be honest, I haven't thought about how Jess actually weighs but I was thinking she was from a size 12-16? But you know what, she is beautiful and so are you! It's time for some positive body image in fanfics, don't you think?

Thank you so much! Hope you liked this chapter and felt the Harry love <3 xxxx

@lalaladooo

Hey lovely! How are you? Thank you so much for the kind words and for reading this story! Means a lot to me :) I'll let you in on a little secret.. Jess is actually based off someone from Tumblr. I wrote this as an "imagine" for her and really liked the concept so thought I'd try and make it into a fan fic. That being said, Jess actually looks pretty normal which is why I've been so hesitant to post a pic of her because 1. she's based off a real person and I don't know how comfortable she'd be with that 2. if I post a pic, people might not like it and it may not be the ones they had in mind so that would put them off in reading this! I'm old-fashioned in a sense that I do want your imaginations run wild in imagining her. The best part about reading fanfics for me is putting myself as the main character to get a clearer idea.

Hope this kind of answers your question! I will try and be more descriptive, but I'm not closing my door on putting a photo of her either. Maybe when this story makes it to the popular page! Haha. Anyway, hope you enjoyed this latest update!xxxx

Please do a make over for Jess that Harry likes her in real !!!!! And please update more ...

i think i should wear a cute pink dress with smokey eyes and lipgloss and cuts heels or something.. xx

@thecafegirl

hey... I just love your story. And my Tumblr ID is loveangelriya.tumblr.com

@thecafegirl
Because I'm fat and when I think of her I think she weighs 200 ponds. Love ur story

heyyy i love this story! it's really different from the others i've read and it's such good writing! One thing I'm wondering is exactly how she looks like. I can't choose between goth and indie, and those are quite different things. When ever there are scenes of them like at the cafe, I kind of have a blank face for her in my head. Could you add a picture of her or something??? Thanks! And keep writing!

@Aylin.

Hey love! How are you?! And yes she was acting a bit strange right! I have serious Harry feels and I can't wait to put all these into writing!xxx

@Emily Miles

Hey! I've been getting so many requests to do this, but I'm undecided if I should or not. Just because I want you guys to just use your imagination! Heck, even imagine yourself as Jess if you want! I wrote her in that kind of way xx

@Yolo directioner

Appreciate your comment! Just wondering, why don't you like her fat?x

@What the what??

Fair enough (about the Tumblr thing)! And yes he is! Wonder how he'll act on this first date though?xxx

@onedirectionlover23

Thanks heaps! Happy reading, lovely xxx

@hehazzabigwhat

Thank you x

I loved this chapter!!! I can tell that Harry is really trying to make an effort to get to know her!! Update please xxx

I think Jess is acting a little bit strange, but Harry´s so cute in this one! Ahh, I know he´s really trying know. :) Can´t wait until they found interest in each other. ;) xx

I love the story so far! and can you please add Jess' pictures so we can see what she looks like?

Plz make her skiny I don't like her fat

Great length for the chapter! Love it!!!

@thecafegirl
Nah I'm not allowed cause my parents are butt heads! Haha I wish I was tho xx

Love this one is it soooooooo good please update soon