Traces of Your Touch (An AU Fanfiction) - Comments, page 7

Absolutely incredible plot! Love it.

nope #TEAMHARRY!

The date was nice of Louis...thoughtful even. But I'm guessing that was his intention seeing how there's a bet now -___-
I think Aria is falling for Louis more now. But I'm still team Haria.
I think Harry came to Aria that late because he just wanted to be with someone. When he said that no one was at his house, I can tell that Harry is lonely so maybe he just wanted some company and maybe to check on how the date went with Louis.
Idk who texted Louis. Probably one of his or Harry's friends.
I think that Harry and Louis made a bet dealing with Aria. The bet is either about 1.) Who can get Aria to fall in love with them first. OR 2.) Who can get Aria to sleep with them first. My guess is the second option though.

I had a bad feeling about Louis and now I see that I was right. Louis is starting to develop feelings for Aria even though it's just a bet. And I think that maybe Louis and Harry are each suppose to take Aria on a date as part of the bet and maybe Harry was going to take Aria to the park, but Louis stole his idea. That's why I think Harry got frustrated when Aria told him about Louis taking her to the park instead of that restaurant. And I think that maybe these bets happy often, which could be why Harry assumed Louis had taken Aria to the restaurant, seeing how he hinted that it's the usual for Louis to take girls to that restaurant. The bet could be why Harry wanted to become friends with benefits with Aria because then it'd be easier to get her to sleep with him.

What just happened? ._.

@Nowshin Styles

Lmao. I know right! Now, I'm dying to know what's gonna happen next.

Oh and

1. Loved the date. absolute perfection.
2. Aria's feelings are still vague for both for me
3. Harry was jealous maybe?
4 and 5. I don't know. I'm dying to find out!!!!

Great update babe! Keep it up cause the chapter was amazing!

I'm screaming right now! Why would you even do this? I mean there you have a perfect little date by Laria, followed by more bonding between Haria! But no! That wasn't enough for you! Was it? I feel like my entire life is a lie right now! #Done

Oh my freaking God! I'm shaking! A freaking bet? The f*ck! I can't do this right now! Nope! Uh- uh! So done!

I just hope is there to help her and protect her and I want him to fall in love with aria

Oh my dear god that wa like the best date ever, I am sure that aria is falling for Louis, harry came late maybe because his parents are like abusive or neglecting or something, idk and louis omg if he messes this up , I'm gonna flip shit, maybe the bet is with Amy, because they like hate herr

1. OH MY GOD YESSSS!!! It was absolutely perfect! But I might just say that because I like Laria best... :)

2. She has to say yes. He is so sweet and caring. Only a fool would say no.

3. He most have some type of problem with relationships/commitment.

4. I think Louis liked a girl before, and Harry ended up seducing her, or something like that...

Please don't make me wait any longer okay! Love you! :D

Love Love Love this story #TEAM HARRY all the way but louis is pretty nice harry in the other side is more of a dominant character but still a great story! Update

Totally team Harry! But it seems he affects her more then Louis does!

1. I thought it was soooo cute the way he asked her out!
2. Aria was feeling super guilty about the whole Harry thing so she might feel like she needs to go to dinner with Louis to feel better.
3. I think his 'problem' is extreme jealousy and things along that line.
4. This dè jà vù thingy is what ruin Louis and Harry's friendship in the first place. Harry must have done something drastic in order for Lou to have a difficult time talking about it. (Remember in the Halloween party)

#TEAM HARRY;)

1. I guess it was cute how Louis asked Aria out but I'm still shipping Haria lol.
2. I think that Aria will say yes, but then again idk because she's feeling really guilty since she's kind of fooling around with Harry behind Louis back. So she might decline since she's not being honest with Louis. Or she might have him wait on her answer until she figures out who and what she wants.
3. I'm completely baffled about this problem that Harry has. I have no idea what him and his psychiatrist are talking about. I need to read more in order to give my assumption on what his problem might be.
4. I'm also confused about what Harry and his psychiatrist were talking about when they said Déjà Vu. My only guess is that maybe in the past, there was a similar situation dealing with Harry, Louis, and another girl. A situation where both Louis and Harry wanted the girl. I'm guessing that whatever the situation is, it didn't end good based off how Dr. Yang got anxious when Harry said that history was repeating itself. And I know for a fact that this Déjà Vu thing deals with Louis because as soon as Harry said that history was repeating itself, Dr. Wang was quick to ask about Louis. Now I'm feeling sketchy about Louis for some reason.
Good update as usual though.

wut

Please post the next chapter. I'm dying without it!

Thanks for the shout out, but you two deserve all the votes and comments you get, because this story absolutely fab! :D

I really can't wait to read more! :)

awwwwwww thx for the shoutout and plz update sooon plz
btw i love u

OMG please please update ur such an amazing writer